jingo9 发表于 2013-9-8 22:02:17

顶一个,14楼给我启发了,谢谢

Mona_Zou 发表于 2016-12-21 05:17:21

这个题目确实很难,对于老外来说也很难把握, 于是找了一篇外国老师给的范文,希望能给需要帮助的人!!
The statement claims that people’s attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole. It seems true that people’s attitudes are determined directly by their immediate surroundings. From children to adolescent to adults, our attitudes are influenced by our parents, teachers as well as friends. However, these people who shape our attitudes are products of a concrete society. So, people’s attitudes are also decided by societies. Therefore, these two forces shape our minds simultaneously and mutually, and it is hard for us to evaluate which play a more significant role in determining people’s attitudes.

People around us determine our attitudes to a large extent. They not only make us happy, angry or sad, but also influence our values gradually. As a result, our attitudes are decided when our moods and values change. For instance, we become excited and even crazy as soon as our most favorite stars appear on the stage; we become so frightened when a robber with a gun pops up. These immediate situations affect considerably our emotions, which is likely to determine our attitudes today. In addition, our parents and teachers always instructed us to set right values, telling us that we should cherish our lives no matter what difficulties we would encounter. These words have an optimistic influence on our attitude towards lives. Or consider the situations in which we make friends with our classmates. In some cases, we begin smoking only because some of our friends smoke at first. Therefore, during numerous interactions with different people, we have our habits or values more or less forced upon us by parents, teachers and friends, which eventually determines our attitudes.

Admittedly, immediate situation or surroundings impact our attitudes greatly, but we cannot ignore the social influence on our attitudes. It is because everyone, ranging from young and old, is the product of a concrete society. All of us share the same attitudes in some respects, which is the result of social environment. Chinese people during the Culture Revolution are an excellent example of this point. At that time, people’s attitude toward other foreign countries, especially America, were more or less fatuous since they considered everything relevant with Western countries dirty and meaningless. This phenomenon was largely caused by contemporary social environment in which government authorities adopted policies of social closure. On the contrary, after reforming and opening-up policy being carried out, Chinese people have become more sensible as well as learning valuable ideas from foreign countries. Therefore, this distinction illustrates that society as a whole determines people’s attitudes.

In conclusion, because people contact with different people everyday in their social circles, their attitudes are influenced by others’ behaviors and words. On the other hand, everyone is the component of a society. Their attitudes are more or less be restricted and shaped by social environment. Thus, it is hard for us to evaluate which play a more important role in determining people’s attitudes.

ba1a糖儿 发表于 2019-5-1 22:09:43

从政界商界法律界(的执行者)的角度来看呢?
政界商界-consider the society as the whole
法律-different situations

政:homosexual marriage。 situation是党内不同意or自己的观点; whole-↑country accept
商:advant of Internet(conservative-opposing while interms of the society ,but social
needs, 好)
法律:society-constitution, regulation; but 不同案件便宜行事- riggid palmer杀了祖父要财产;
judge判刑  invalidate his right to devolve

感觉自己跑题了。。但好像这样写更容易
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