囧哥做语法21
In the Louisiana Purchase of 1803, the United States acquired 828,000 square miles for about four cents an acre, which more than doubled the country's size and that brought its western border within reach of the Pacific Ocean.(A) In the Louisiana Purchase of 1803, the United States acquired 828,000 square miles for about four cents an acre, which more than doubled the country's size and that brought
(B) For about four cents an acre the United States acquired, in the Louisiana Purchase of 1803, 828,000 square miles, more than doubling the country's size and it brought
(C) With the Louisiana Purchase in 1803, the United States acquired 828,000 square miles for about four cents an acre, more than doubling its size and bringing
(D) The United States, in the Louisiana Purchase of 1803, for about four cents an acre, acquired 828,000 square miles, more than doubling the country's size, bringing
(E) Acquiring 828,000 square miles in the Louisiana Purchase of 1803, the United States bought it for about four cents an acre, more than doubling the country's size and bringing
考察修饰
A.which就近修饰acre，不对
B.句子结构杂糅，而且没有主语
C正确，句子结构是：with...,SVO,doing
D不符合修饰的简洁性（主语和谓语离远了）而且bringing应该和前面的doubling平行
E.acquire变成了acquiring，这里的double和bring是acquire的结果，所以double和bring应该是ing形式。而且e中的it指代不清晰。
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