囧囧哥 发表于 2013-4-19 10:13:35

囧哥做语法55

Because she knew many of the leaders of colonial America and the American Revolution personally, Mercy Otis Warren was continually at or near the center of political events from 1765to1789,a vantage point combing with her talent for writing to make her one of the most valuable historians of the era.
A a vantage point combing with her talent for writing to make
B a vantage point, when combined with her talent for writing ,that made
C a vantage point that combined with her talent for writing ,and it made
D and this vantage point, which combined with her talent for writing to make
E and this vantage point, combined with her talent for writing ,made

句子结构:
Because she knew ..., MOW was at or near the center of political events, a vantage point combing with..
Combine A with B, vantage point 不能发出combine这个动作,所以A错。
B 中when引导状语从句,并出现了省略现象,所以从句是when combined with her...主句是a vantage point that made很明显这里的主句成分残缺
C中,a vantage point做了插入语,主句和it made并列,不符合逻辑
D中and后面句子结构不完整缺少谓语
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