Issue177 第一篇限时文章，所以蹦出的都是超简单单词，大家帮看看
Issue177 "The study of an academic discipline alters the way we perceive the world. After studying the discipline, we see the same world as before, but with different eyes."不知道有没有长进，大家帮看看。
最怕跑题和不知所云， 等着大家的鸡蛋，不用客气，猛砸吧
The speaker concludes that we will see the same world with different eyes after the study of an academic of discipline. I strongly agree with it. Special study not only alters the way we perceive the world, but also provides us more objective view.
Different people will give different ideas when they confront with the same facts, such as history, accident, painting, music and so on. Just take a painting for example, it is more likely for an artist to consider the precious value of culture and the possible merits which he or she can learn from it. While, when it comes to a socialist, he or she will take more energy to consider about its positive or negative influence which may proceed on the society at the time the painting produced. Hardly will a merchant found the artistic value and social value from the painting, and he or she might start evaluating the margin between buy and sale at the first glance of the painting. Above all, we can find that it is impossible for people with different work background view at the same eyes
Understandably, the study of an academic discipline is a process in which we come into being our separate eyes. For instance, after the national wide speared disease SARS bursted out last year, all kinds of analysis come out for explaining the possible result it may bring to the whole society and even the whole world. Economic students may pay more their attention on the analysis about the possible damage on Chinese economy at that time. Similarly, the latest development of drug or something else that leads to better treatment will interest the students with the knowledge of medicine. Therefore, education will ultimately alter people the way they perceive the world.
Moreover, adequate academic knowledge gives students a chance to perceive the world more objective insofar as his or her special level. As a threshold matter, without the benefit of objective perspective gained through the earnest study of the way and knowledge of front people, it is impossible to fully understand, analyze and solve the problem we face. Additionally, by approaching objective view without any traditional knowledge it is impossible to distinguish right and wrong. Only by studying the discipline can a student develop fair standards for judging the problem from academic eye.
In sum, persons with special academic knowledge perceive the world in different eyes and it is undoubted that the study of an academic discipline alters the view before, then, provides students with objective academic view. :( 鸡蛋好难求啊，我只好自己顶啦
是不是字数少了点阿
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用词是有些简单,你大几啊,是用pp3模考吗? 真丢脸，再烂我也要发，快考了是用PP3 阿
在结构和逻辑上，有没有需要修改的？ The speaker concludes that we will see the same world with different eyes after the study of an academic of discipline. I strongly agree with it. Special study not only alters the way we perceive the world, but also provides us more objective view.
Different people will give different ideas when they confront with the same facts, such as history, accident, painting, music and so on. Just take a painting for example(? 这样用不好吧？改成work 怎么样？）, it is more likely for an artist to consider the precious value of culture and the possible merits which he or she can learn from it（没it了） . While, when it comes to a socialist, he or she will take more energy to consider about its positive or negative influence which may proceed on the society at the time the painting produced. Hardly will a merchant found the artistic value and social value from the painting, and he or she might start evaluating the margin between buy（v？？） and sale at the first glance of the painting. Above all, we （别用we）can find that it is impossible for people with different work background view at the same eyes
Understandably, the study of an academic discipline is a process in which we come into being our separate eyes. For instance, after the national wide speared disease SARS bursted（after后面哦bursting） out last year, all kinds of analysis come out for explaining the possible result it may bring to the whole society and even the whole world. Economic students may pay more their attention on the analysis about the possible damage on Chinese economy at that time. Similarly, the latest development of drug or something else that leads to better treatment will interest the students with the knowledge of medicine. Therefore, education will ultimately alter people the way they perceive the world.
Moreover, adequate academic knowledge gives students a chance to perceive the world more objective insofar as his or her special level. As a threshold matter, without the benefit of objective perspective gained through the earnest study of the way and knowledge of front people, it is impossible to fully understand, analyze and solve the problem we face. Additionally, by approaching objective view without any traditional knowledge it is impossible to distinguish right and wrong. Only by studying the discipline can a student develop fair standards for judging the problem from academic eye.
In sum, persons with special academic knowledge perceive the world in different eyes and it is undoubted that the study of an academic discipline alters the view before, then, provides students with objective academic view.
总的来说还可以，但是我觉得你可以把握一下学习前后的对比，毕竟题目谈到是一个改变的过程啊，从不知到知的一个阶段，我不知道这样把握好不好，你参考一下啊 流泪!!!!!,第一次有人说我的ISSUE 还可以,
即使是还可以,足够我感动半天了
谢谢啊,确实有必要比较一下,我的论证方式总是太单一了
修改如下
Understandably, the study of an academic discipline is a process in which we come into being our separate eyes--that are more special views used to interpreting phenomena than before. For instance, after the national wide speared disease SARS bursting out last year, all kinds of analyses come out for explaining the possible results it may bring to the whole society and even the whole world. Economic students may pay more their attention on the analysis about the possible damage on Chinese economy at that time. Similarly, the latest development of drug or something else that leads to better treatment will interest the students with the knowledge of medicine. Without the special eyes and different value systems involved in subsequent academic education,it is more likely for people to echo what other's say, as if babies always do. Therefore, education will ultimately alter people the way they perceive the world
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