issue183，觉得是该被批的
183As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and more mysterious写好后一直很别扭，这个题目抽象了点，不止到能不能这样展开，随便批吧
With the development of the society, natural science and social science help people learn more about the world and the things seems to be clear, actually, under some circumstance, in-depth researches on things cause three consequences at the some time: comprehensible, complex and mysterious rather than merely understand.
Accumulated knowledge helps problems or theories to be expressed clearly and lucidly so that people feel easy to understand the issues. For example, Galileo, who was a famous Italian astronomer who despise the prejudices and book learning of the Aristotelians, who put his question to the nature instead of the ancient, and who drew his conclusion fearlessly. Eventually, his experiment and observation established a new theory and overthrew the old one from Aristotle. Because of his success and theories, people learn how to observe the sky with telescope and begin to understand another space, which is far from the earth. Obviously, without knowledge from Galileo’s theory, universe might also be a inspiration and even a vacancy. Take another scientist for example, Edison, who invented electric bulb by making thousand experiment and brought the society into a brilliant century. Recently, people live in a society which full of light and help them to learn what they can see and observe. With the revolution of human beings, knowledge solves various problems and creates a more comprehensible and comfortable life to the people.
However, those knowledge makes us to considered the reason and origin for human nature of curiosity, as a result, the world become increasingly complex. Take the same instance what have pointed above, although people learn to use telescope to observe the sky, people unsatisfied with such a "observation" and desire to touch with the outer space and understand other planets. In this case, scientists invented the spacecraft which have successfully landed on the Moon and Mars, after these experiments, people know that there are no water and few gravitation in Moon, and the Mas might have the similar condition of the earth. however, the complex problems come out, because people feel difficulty to explain the phenomena in the outer space. Therefore, the research on astronomy becomes complex and involved. Not only this field, but also all scientific area becomes complicate. When people understand a surface of things, they will feel anxious to learn the core of them, however, the deeper people do researches, the more complications exist.
Additionally, in-depth learning causes desire of researching for mystery, which follows the existence of complication. Indeed, there are many uncanny problems in process of doing research when people hope to point out the reason of complex issue. For example, the construction of pyramid has been an enigma for a long time, because people fail to imagine that the ancient people can construct such a palatial with old and traditional method. Moreover, "black hole" would be a mysterious place that astronomers desire to touch and understand because no one know a little about this untouched field. Faced with these things, human nature motivates and stimulates people to purchase the reason and the secret.
In sum, people learn more about things by accumulating knowledge and then establish new theory and system, and at the same time, complex and mysterious problems exist simultaneously for the desire of exploring secret and untouched field-all of these constitute a process of learning and researching 183As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and more mysterious
写好后一直很别扭，这个题目抽象了点，不止到能不能这样展开，随便批吧
With the development of the society, natural science and social science help people learn more about the world and the things seems to be clear,为什么不用句号？！ actually, under some circumstance, in-depth researches on things cause three consequences at the some time是不是想来个强调一把 那也别用the some啊 多别扭 而且我觉得没什么好强调的: comprehensible, complex and mysterious首先哈 这个consequences后面用了冒号就应该是一堆名词 其次 这和rather than 后面的也没法子对应啊词性上 rather than merely understand.
Accumulated knowledge helps problems or theories to be expressed 怪 怎么看这句都怪 用help后面还是跟人好点 要不就别用helpclearly and lucidly so that people feel easy to understand the issues. For example, Galileo, who was a famous Italian astronomer who despise the prejudices and book learning of the Aristotelians, who put his question to the nature instead of the ancient, and who drew his conclusion fearlessly. Eventually, his experiment and observation established a new theory and overthrew the old one from Aristotle. Because of his success and theories, people learn how to observe the sky with telescope and begin to understand another space, which is far from the earth. Obviously, without knowledge from Galileo’s theory, universe might also be a inspiration and even a vacancy. Take another scientist for example, Edison, who invented electric bulb by making thousand experiment and brought the society into a brilliant century. Recently, people live in a society which full of light and help them to learn what they can see and observe. With the revolution of human beings, knowledge solves various problems and creates a more comprehensible and comfortable life to the people. 不知道是怎么感觉的 觉得这里就是一个例子的杂烩 但是几乎没有深入的探讨knowledge到底怎么help problem 重点都是在人身上~
However, those knowledge makes us to considered the reason and origin for human nature of curiosity, 干嘛非要用一句话， 用一句话也应该是；不是， ，是连接句子成分的！as a result, the world become increasingly complex. Take the same instance whatthat have pointed above, although people learn to use telescope to observe the sky, people are unsatisfied with such a "observation" and desire to touch with the outer space and understand other planets. In this case, scientists invented the spacecraft which havehas successfully landed on the Moon and Mars, after these experiments, people know that there are no water and few gravitation in Moon, and the Mas might have the similar condition of the earth. however, the complex problems come out, because people feel difficulty to explain the phenomena in the outer space. Therefore, the research on astronomy becomes complex and involved. Not only this field, but also all scientific area becomes complicate. When people understand a surface of things, they will feel anxious to learn the core of them, however, the deeper people do researches, the more complications exist.例子用完就用完了？ 网撒了记得要收啊
Additionally, in-depth learning causes desire of researching for mystery, which follows the existence of complication. Indeed, there are many uncanny problems in process of doing research when people hope to point out the reason of complex issue. For example, the construction of pyramid has been an enigma for a long time, because people fail to imagine that the ancient people can construct such a palatial with old and traditional method. Moreover, "black hole" would be a mysterious place这个是从学术上给你的解释了 你不是学物理的吧 黑洞不是一个地方 一个地点 而是一种物理理论假设 或者是一种天文现象 呵呵 that astronomers desire to touch and understand because no one know a little about this untouched field. Faced with these things, human nature motivates and stimulates people to purchase the reason and the secret. 不错 记得收还
In sum, people learn more about things by accumulating knowledge and then establish new theory and system, and at the same time, complex and mysterious problems exist simultaneously for the desire of exploring secret and untouched field-all of these constitute a process of learning and researching.
逻辑还是不错的 继续努力哦~~~ 我给你看看吧！要花点时间的，但我不是高手哦！ 这些例子能用我就用了，没仔细想，黑洞也只是随便靠感觉的，呵呵，一般人看看就知道了，可能是题目抽象，所以实在不知道怎么用客观的话来证明，然后就摆狸子，所以在证明上比较弱。考试要是遇见这类我一定不会写的，实在是头大的问题啊，逻辑方面这样三步可以啊，刚开始我自己都拿不定啊 谢谢libby，其实只要给一点意见都会是进步 呵呵 这种类型的文章我这个人比较懒 观点从来都是37开就OK了的那种 呵呵
是这样的 这种文章本来就是拼例子 不过 还是那句话 例子不是用了就用了的 要适当分析一下下的
你什么时候考啊 是限定时间写的吗 如果是限定写的 还是不错的就 妇女节，限时的，呵呵
小猫你能解释一下28题目中那个facts 和 ideas， trend concepts 之间关系吗？我怎么觉得facts也包括后面这些啊 看一下哦~~~~~
呵呵 偶个人以为咧
facts有点象历史事件 比如罗 什么什么年发生什么什么事 就是纯粹的一个事情
ideas有点象文学里面的作者思路 说简单一点就是点子罗 不过没有那么粗俗啦~
trends有点象经济理论里面对未来经济走势的把握和预测
concepts有点象物理里面赋予的概念 比如 什么叫做力 还有一些很理论上的东西
这样一比喻应该要明白一点了说吧
相对后三者 前面的不过是最死硬的东西 把它当作基础也可以 而后面的呢 就是一些总结和升华的东东~~
呵呵 我个人呢 还有一个比喻哦 就是前面的是珠子 后面的是彩线 彩线穿珠罗~~~
不晓得我颠三倒四的说 你明白一点没有哦~~~ 183As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and more mysterious
写好后一直很别扭，这个题目抽象了点，不止到能不能这样展开，随便批吧
With the development of the society, natural science and social science help people learn more about the world and the things seems to be clear, actually, under some circumstance, in-depth researches on things (这里的主语是哪个啊？我看不懂！sorry！)cause three consequences at the some time: comprehensible, complex and mysterious rather than merely understand.
Accumulated knowledge helps problems or theories to be expressed clearly and lucidly so that people feel easy to understand the issues. For example, Galileo, who was a famous Italian astronomer who despise（刚才看了一下NCE4 应该是despised吧！） the prejudices and book learning of the Aristotelians, who put his question to the nature instead of the ancient, and who drew his conclusion fearlessly. Eventually, his experiment and observation established a new theory and overthrew the old one from Aristotle. Because of his success and theories, people learn how to observe the sky with telescope and begin to understand another space, which is far from the earth. Obviously, without knowledge from Galileo’s theory, universe might also be a inspiration and even a vacancy. Take another scientist for example, Edison, who invented electric bulb by making thousand experiment（thousands of experiments）and brought the society into a brilliant century. Recently, people live in a society which （is）full of light and help them to learn what they can see and observe. With the revolution of human beings, knowledge solves various problems and creates a more comprehensible and comfortable life to the people.
However, those knowledge makes us to considered the reason and origin for human nature of curiosity, as a result, the world become increasingly complex. Take the same instance what have pointed above, although people learn to use telescope to observe the sky, people unsatisfied with such a（an） "observation" and desire to touch with the outer space and understand other planets. In this case, scientists invented the spacecraft which have successfully landed on the Moon and Mars, after these experiments, people know that there are no water and few gravitation in Moon, and the Mas might have the similar condition of the earth. however, the complex problems come out, because people feel difficulty（different吧！feel后是不是应该跟adj啊？） to explain the phenomena in the outer space. Therefore, the research on astronomy becomes complex and involved. Not only this field, but also all scientific area（为什么不是areas？） becomes （increasingly）complicate. When people understand a surface of things, they will feel anxious to learn the core of them, however, the deeper people do researches, the more complications exist.
Additionally, in-depth learning causes desire of researching for mystery, which follows the existence of complication. Indeed, there are many uncanny problems in process of doing research when people hope to point out the reason of complex issue. For example, the construction of pyramid has been an enigma for a long time, because people fail to imagine that the ancient people can construct such a palatial with old and traditional method. Moreover, "black hole" would be a mysterious place that astronomers desire to touch and understand because no one know a little about this untouched field. Faced with these things, human nature motivates and stimulates people to purchase the reason and the secret.
In sum, people learn more about things by accumulating knowledge and then establish new theory and system, and at the same time, complex and mysterious problems exist simultaneously for the desire of exploring secret and untouched field-all of these constitute a process of learning and researching.
说真的很pfpf 你的能举出这么多例子，而且个个都写的很清楚！
结构也很清楚！真的很不错了！
我的提纲是这样的你看看怎样啊！
一， 论述knowledge 怎样将 things变的简单：比如：computer science将复杂计算简单化，mechanization将复杂的体力劳动简单化。这样就使得人们更容易理解这些事。
二， 由于研究的深入和知识的accumulate 使得人类面临着更多的复杂问题，但并不是说things变的more complex or mysterious。
三， 怎样解决现在面临的这样的问题呢？ 只有不但的学习新知识和不断深入的研究问题。
呵呵！我不是高手啊！也不知道自己说的对不？请指教！谢 183 As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and more mysterious
With the development of the society, natural science and social science help people learn more about the world and the things seems to be clear, actually, under some circumstance, in-depth researches on things cause three consequences at the some time: comprehensible, complex and mysterious rather than merely understand.
Accumulated knowledge helps problems or theories to be expressed clearly and lucidly so that people feel easy to understand the issues. For example, Galileo, who was[去掉who was] a famous Italian astronomer who despise the prejudices and book learning of the Aristotelians, who put his question to the nature instead of the ancient, and who drew his conclusion fearlessly. Eventually, his experiment and observation established a new theory and overthrew the old one from Aristotle. Because of his success and theories, people learn how to observe the sky with telescope and begin to understand another space, which is far from the earth. Obviously, without knowledge from Galileo’s theory, universe might also be a inspiration and even a vacancy. Take another scientist for example, Edison, who invented electric bulb by making thousand[+s of] experiment and brought the society into a brilliant century[在这里应该切题一下]. Recently, people live in a society which full of light and help[+s] them to learn what they can see and observe. With the revolution of human beings, knowledge solves various problems and creates a more comprehensible and comfortable life to the people.
However, those knowledge makes us to considered the reason and origin for human nature of curiosity, as a result, the world become increasingly complex. Take the same instance what have pointed above, although people learn to use telescope to observe the sky, people unsatisfied with such a "observation" and desire[+d] to touch with the outer space and understand other planets. In this case, scientists invented the spacecraft[+s] which have successfully landed on the Moon and Mars, after these experiments, people know that there are no water and few gravitation in Moon, and the Mas might have the similar condition of the earth. however, the complex problems come out, because people feel difficulty[-y] to explain the phenomena in the outer space. Therefore, the research on astronomy becomes complex and involved. Not only this field, but also all scientific area becomes complicate[+d]. When people understand a surface of things, they will feel anxious to learn the core of them, however, the deeper people do researches, the more complications exist.
Additionally, in-depth learning causes desire of researching for mystery, which follows the existence of complication. Indeed, there are many uncanny problems in process of doing research when people hope to point out the reason of complex issue. For example, the construction of pyramid has been an enigma for a long time, because people fail to imagine that the ancient people can construct such a palatial with old and traditional method. Moreover, "black hole" would be a mysterious place that astronomers desire to touch and understand because no one know a little about this untouched field. Faced with these things, human nature motivates and stimulates people to purchase the reason and the secret.
In sum, people learn more about things by accumulating knowledge and then establish new theory and system, and at the same time, complex and mysterious problems exist simultaneously for the desire of exploring secret and untouched field-all of these constitute a process of learning and researching
[上面的给你改的还可以,我仅仅是改了你的一些语法诟病.这点你的问题也不少.以后要细心些.
例子用的不错,逻辑分析也可.遣词造句不错.
再接再厉!] 忘记了，第一句，actually前面是分号，那样主语就明确了，我的老毛病，呵呵
who despise（刚才看了一下NCE4 应该是despised吧！） ---没看过那本书啊，为什么加d哦？
低级错误 真多，咳
你的提纲不错，但是我怕三论起来会有点枯燥，可能主观的话会比较多点
其实我例子随便举的，有些也不是很得当，这种抽象题目没例子就没话说了，越说到真是象题目一样，简单复杂化了 最初由 so猫 发布
看一下哦~~~~~
呵呵 偶个人以为咧
facts有点象历史事件 比如罗 什么什么年发生什么什么事 就是纯粹的一个事情
ideas有点象文学里面的作者思路 说简单一点就是点子罗 不?.
以下省略......
刚刚去写了，还没看见你的话啊，我把facts理解成书面上简单的定义什么的，但为了避免错误解释，文中没明确说，其他的都带过了，当作原因啊，发展啊，结果影响啊。模糊概念，我的脑袋不行了。你的解释不错，按照这样的话我应该加一段支持facts的，基础学习嘛，呵呵 谢谢madtoy，我的一大缺点就是错字和语法，而且爆多低级的那中，一紧张就更乱，呵呵，神，赐给我力量吧 雪夭，想问一下你一个论点举这么多例子，会不会显的有点罗嗦啊？
despised 我看了NCE4的，你不是背那篇文章吗？但我看你的那几句和那上面一样的啊！！！
一般讲过去的事都用过去时啊！ 我在其他网上看见不错拿来用的，呵呵
这里的例子的确是多了点，我会再改改的，只是题目中的三个n词实在难以用一般文字阐述
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