【独立写作】乖如许作业贴
本帖最后由 乖如许 于 2014-12-8 20:35 编辑12.8
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important goal of education is to teach people how to educate themselves.
12.7独立
Some students prefer to have their final grades determined by numerous small assignments, whereas others prefer to have their final grades determined by only a few large assignments. Which do you prefer and why?
11.11综合
11.6独立
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? agriculture damages the environment by producing more food.
作文思路
1.表明立场同意这种看法
2.耕地会破坏森林，几年下来会破坏环境
3.施肥会破坏土地组成
4.再次总结
11.5独立
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should know events happening around the world even if they have little to do with daily life.
作文思路
1.表明立场支持这种说法
2.国家的政策要执行
3.一方有难八方支援
4.总结
11.4独立
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People often buy products not because they really need them but because other people have them.
作文思路
1.对乱买东西介绍
2.买东西认不清要参照别人的
3.广告对买化妆品的影响
11.3综合
11.2独立
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The modern life is more and more complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
作文思路
1.对现代生活节奏之快的介绍，对以上说法表示同意
2.现代生活分为学习工作生活，现讲述学习与工作中安排时间的重要性
3.只有按时把学习任务和工作完成，才会有时间去安排怎么享受生活
4.总结
11.1 独立
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? We should state our honest opinions even though other people may disagree with them.
作文思路
1.对人与人之间交往应具备的态度的介绍
2.让步，承认be honest 是很必要的。
3.反例，有时be honest 对别人是一种伤害
4.总结
沙发～改好啦～有问题可以讨论呐，改得不是请直言～ 11/1 号的哈
11.3 请多指教 改好啦～改错请直言，改对多讨论～ QuintusX 发表于 2014-11-4 15:34 static/image/common/back.gif
改好啦～改错请直言，改对多讨论～
看过了，我的听力还是记不全啊，学习了！ 豆瓶 发表于 2014-11-4 11:44 static/image/common/back.gif
11.3 请多指教
看过了，改的很好，谢谢啦！！ 我昨天到今天忙到没空写。。。帮你改了。 改好啦~有和你想法不一样的可以再讨论哈~ 11.5 文章语法什么的作者自己琢磨一下可能比我改的会更好，所以我就不提这方面了。我想说一下立意。作者给的两个例子很好，时代感很强，这点非常好，但略有点缺乏论述，这样的话对于论证主题就弱一点，或者说由例子引申到主题弱一点，可以再思考一下。（不好意思，因为用手机的，没办法放在word里） 没什么大问题 继续努力！ 童鞋，12.8的作文好像还没有上传哦
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