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lmz要出国 发表于 2015-6-8 14:17:56

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第一次作业https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=1795774&page=14#pid1779545394
一下是第二次作业：
The following appeared in a letter from a homeowner to a friend.

"Of the two leading real estate firms in our town—Adams Realty and Fitch Realty—Adams Realty is clearly superior. Adams has 40 real estate agents; in contrast, Fitch has 25, many of whom work only part-time. Moreover, Adams' revenue last year was twice as high as that of Fitch and included home sales that averaged $168,000, compared to Fitch's $144,000. Homes listed with Adams sell faster as well: ten years ago I listed my home with Fitch, and it took more than four months to sell; last year, when I sold another home, I listed it with Adams, and it took only one month. Thus, if you want to sell your home quickly and at a good price, you should use Adams Realty.

Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted."

结论：if you want to sell your home quickly and at a good price, you should use Adams Realty
论据：Adams has 40 real estate agents; in contrast, Fitch has 25, many of whom work only part-time.
        Adams' revenue last year was twice as high as that of Fitch and included home sales that averaged $168,000, compared to Fitch's $144,000
        Homes listed with Adams sell faster as well: ten years ago I listed my home with Fitch, and it took more than four months to sell; last year, when I sold another home, I listed it with Adams, and it took only one month.
第一段：
in the letter from a homeowner, the writer asserted that based on the number of agents, revenue and the speed of sale,  Adams Realty is better than Fitch Realty. But according to my understand, those assumptions are all have flaw and are not unassailable.

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livederup 发表于 2015-6-11 21:32:14

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xyyee 发表于 2015-6-11 21:34:33

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