1.不同意，应当更看重对于社会的贡献
2.是其义务
3.兴趣也很重要
4.如果只重兴
5.总结
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我觉得既然强调对社会的贡献就没必要把兴趣的重要性单独提出来写了，我担心有冲淡主题的嫌疑。如果我写的话，我会在第三点安排讲一下不重贡献只重兴趣的后果，然后把你的三四点放在一起作为让步，这样既有ets最喜欢的正反论又有让步缓和一下气氛，是不是会好一点？ Issue40
Scholars and researchers should not be concerned with whether their work makes a contribution to the larger society. It is more important that they pursue their individual interests, however unusual or idiosyncratic those interests may seem.
提纲：
1.不同意，应当更看重对于社会的贡献
2.是其义务
3.兴趣也很重要
4.如果只重兴趣
5.总结
Such a topic reminds me to take a look around the world we are living in nowadays, and what I find is that lives more convenient than ever before are largely based on the contributions of numerous scholars and researchers' work. Do or did they do these all only for their interests as stated above? Somewhat, I do prefer an opposite view that scholars and researchers should concentrate mostly more on the larger society rather than their individual interests.开头写得不错
Primarily, standing on the top floor of the pyramid of mankind intellect, scientists have the obligation to advance the human beings' civilization by exerting their special knowledge. First, what cannot be denied is that it is undeniable that更顺点 almost all kinds of science and technologies were born spontaneously or intentionally as a result of the mankind's survival needs, namely, the benefits of the whole society, which are both material and spiritual, not merely of interests. 这句写得真棒 Second, scholars and researchers, who are piths of the society and have mastered the most advanced knowledge, are the only ones able to impulse the mankind civilization forth. 有点武断 Since human beings are still suffering for so many causes, it is necessary for them to concentrate on whether their work can do help with these problems and then make a contribution to the larger society. For instance, in the angle of physic, some diseases like ADIS and Ebola are still out of control; from the living aspect, inventions are far away to meet the needs of daily life. Otherwise scholars would be condemned as selfish and incorrect if their work has nothing to do with the society benefit.
Admittedly, interests play a significant role in scholars and researchers work, which would appeal people to take the sake both enthusiastically and devotedly. In 多余，删 lack of interests at the beginning and during the process, scientists would not even launch a subject, no more talking engaging in it. Edison to be a great inventor is surely linked with his interests with DIY when he was still young, and so did Bill Gates, whose MicroSoft have transformed the whole world, have especial curiosity on computer operating system. It is easy to see the effect of interests on spurring people up when facing difficulties and on directing them ponder further.
However, though to some extent, scientists' work are pursued for their interests, to over accentuate it and put the contribution to the larger society aside would be a regretful choice, especially when their interests are overwhelmingly idiosyncratic and beyond the normal scale, for such risky interests might lead to severe results. A brutal example will be exhibited as following. During the Second World War, Japanese biochemists, who were serving for the army, established several laboratories in the Northeast of China, where they applied bacterial and extreme condition (such as extremely hot or cold) experiments to alive Chinese captives. Should these immoral and inhumane studies be developed for the interests of scientist? Also, today there are some independent scholars are studying on clone technology on human body. But before it is proven harmless to human bodies and the latent ethnic problems are solved, the research should be prohibited.731是为兴趣而工作的吗？例子有问题
In conclusion, scholars and researchers should not carry out their studies only for chasing their own interests, by doing which they may drive human beings into danger in some cases. That should be more 意思我明白，但这个more怪怪的 taken into account that whether the larger society would benefit from their researches since scientists are the hope for a promising tomorrow of mankind.(578 words)
别人改得很细，我就只改了他们没提到的问题
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http://211.151.90.54/bbs/showthread.php?s=&threadid=180610 谢谢apolloxp，刚才下去就是去看你的椰树了。上来看见你修改我的文章，很高兴。
你的椰树改好了，砖比较重，你要扛住：） 最初由 fishergirl 发布
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have especial [我只见过especially，呵呵] curiosity on computer operating system. It is easy to see the effect of interests on spurring people up when facing difficulties and on directing them ponder further.[这里好像又提出了一个很好的分论点，可惜没有论证。]
especial：特别的
这一段的作用是让步，不是重点，更不能够不停去论证interest的作用，使得削弱主要观点（写了这一段已经有人觉得让得好，有人觉得没有用甚至起反作用了呢）
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That should be more taken into account that whether the larger society would benefit from their researches since scientists are the hope for a promising tomorrow of mankind. [最后这句是病句](578 words)
开头的that应该是it……//shy
再次谢谢小渔女，辛苦翻了半天找这篇帖子！
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