Issue41 请大家指教
Issue41 第14篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！------摘要------
作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户 共用时间：44分46秒 453 words
从2004年3月6日18时51分到2004年3月6日19时44分
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Such nonmainstream areas of inquiry as astrology, fortune-telling, and psychic and paranormal pursuits play a vital role in society by satisfying human needs that are not addressed by mainstream science.
提纲：
1〉迷信对人们的工作生活起消极作用。
2〉它对人们的优良的道德观念损害极大
3〉它也不是没有好处，对科学研究，艺术创作有帮助
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The speaker claims that non-mainstream areas of inquiry are vital in society and crucial for human needs which can not be addressed by mainstream science. However, in my view, although non-mainstream areas of inquiry may own a few merits to society, their potential harms that bring to human are far outweigh their benefits as discussed below.
From the beginning, astrology, fortune-telling, psychic and paranormal pursuits, or whatever kind of superstition, actually draw people into a situation of depress and inactive rather than cure their psychological pains. Those supervisions would inevitably lead people to concede fatalism and encumber them fighting for their better lives. In fortune-telling, for example, tellers often instruct people that their fates are born determined and thereby it is no use to work hard for their objects. This view actually damage the motivation of human and finally cause a chaos in the society if the governments do not strictly restrict such behavior, since many people holding passive minds to their lives would definitely baffle the development of the society. Moreover, some may utilize such tools to cheat people for profit and they actually do not concern the harm their false instruction bring to ordinary people. Therefore, those non-mainstream areas of inquiry, in fact, damage the well-being of our society.
Furthermore, conviction to those superstitions would cause an impact to the common wisdom of ethics. Consider, for instance, trying one's best to save lives is a merit manner in our society, and by holding such belief, the public can realize the value of life. However, that fatalism, on the contrary, depresses people in plight, since it tells people their fates are destined. If this opinion is prevalent, many people who can save their lives by themselves would run into the opposite direction. In that case, the passengers and crews on Titanic might lose hope for survive and no survivor could come back from that disaster; patients suffering from cancers will refuse for further remedy. Hence, superstition also damage to the healthful minds of the public.
Admittedly, those areas themselves do not absolutely contradict the human's civilization and have no value to our society. As an inevitable outcome during when human beings explore the nature, superstition played an important role when human lacked substantial knowledge to cognize many phenomena in the world. Furthermore, they also have some scientific and artistic values. In anthropology, archeology, and arts, superstition help scientists acknowledge the culture of a tribe or nation, inspire creative ideas of artists. In that case, those non-mainstream areas also have their own merits.
Although non-mainstream areas of inquiry contribute a little to scientific researches and artistic creation, people should not omit their great passive or even harmful views they bring to the society. 呵呵，占座了。
The speaker claims that non-mainstream areas of inquiry are vital in society and crucial for human needs which can not be addressed by mainstream science. However, in my view, although non-mainstream areas of inquiry may own a few merits to society, their potential harms that bring to human are far outweigh their benefits as discussed below.提出观点，很清晰。
From the beginning, astrology, fortune-telling, psychic and paranormal pursuits, or whatever kind of superstition, actually draw people into a situation of depress and inactive rather than cure their psychological pains. Those supervisions would inevitably lead people to concede fatalism and encumber them fighting for their better lives. In fortune-telling, for example, tellers often instruct people that their fates are born determined and thereby it is no use to work hard for their objects. This view actually damage the motivation of human and finally cause a chaos in the society if the governments do not strictly restrict such behavior, since many people holding passive minds to their lives would definitely baffle the development of the society呵呵，我觉得不合逻辑哦，消极的思想不一定引起社会的混乱，有点绝对吧，换个修饰词好些. Moreover, some may utilize such tools to cheat people for profit and they actually do not concern the harm their false instruction bring to ordinary people. Therefore, those non-mainstream areas of inquiry, in fact, damage the well-being of our society.总体上很清楚，值得我学习哦:p.
Furthermore, conviction to those superstitions would cause an impact to the common wisdom of ethics. Consider, for instance, trying one's best to save lives is a merit manner in our society, and by holding such belief, the public can realize the value of life. However, that fatalism, on the contrary, depresses people in plight, since it tells people their fates are destined. If this opinion is prevalent, many people who can save their lives by themselves would run into the opposite direction. In that case, the passengers and crews on Titanic might lose hope for survive and no survivor could come back from that disaster; patients suffering from cancers will refuse for further remedy. Hence, superstition also damage to the healthful minds of the public. 后面的例子用来论证上一段比较好，我觉得TS和例子不符。
Admittedly, those areas themselves do not absolutely contradict the human's civilization and have no value to our society. As an inevitable outcome during when human beings explore the nature, superstition played an important role when human lacked substantial knowledge to cognize many phenomena in the world. Furthermore, they also have some scientific and artistic values. In anthropology, archeology, and arts, superstition help scientists acknowledge the culture of a tribe or nation, inspire creative ideas of artists. In that case, those non-mainstream areas also have their own merits.有时会让人有勇气活下去，不过于泄气，也可以从这方面让步吧？你让步很好。
Although non-mainstream areas of inquiry contribute a little to scientific researches and artistic creation, people should not omit their great passive or even harmful views they bring to the society.最后一段有些单薄，我也经常这样，头疼~~~ 谢谢yifeng，这是改的一篇，第一次写都不知道怎样展开，乱七八糟的。
至于最后一段，我放弃了，毕竟不是重点，我现在的目标是——
开头论点清楚，中间论证结构完整，具有说服力，重点放在论证
合理性上。 本来写了一篇41想来切磋一下的，用了倒计时，第一次，44分钟，530字，正要发，安全检查的来了，室友在慌乱之中一脚踢飞了我的电源，什么都没了，没了，郁闷ing
我的提纲是这样的：
nonmainstream areas will continue existing, but will not play a vital role
1:因为越多知识，接触的问题也越多，一时间无法解决
2:人类对死亡的恐惧使人们向非主流求救，而身后事没人能知道，也就无法判断它的对错
3:然而，越来越多的现象被主流解决，也发展了许多学科，如天文代替 astrology,医学代替驱魔，人们对生命也更加珍惜因为人们更多的意识到生命多罢只有这一回了
4:非主流还有害处，它建立在更多的非理性基础上，使我们的科学进程变慢，社会进步就慢了。另外，使人们变的容易被蛊惑，煽动，从而被危险的组织利用 “室友在慌乱之中一脚踢飞了我的电源”——————同情中 不过越来越强的预感我要考41题了，在满分上抽了两次这道题，我有两个同学这两天考了，还帮个同学改过这篇，今天又遭此横祸！！不知不觉我已经迷信了哈，呵呵，还是对精神有鼓舞作用的哦 呵呵，我也是因为41是今天南京的基金才写的，上帝保佑，呵呵^_^ 上次我考的就是这道题。。。。 我想补充一点。
当人们遇到了不幸或挫折时，容易接受非主流的东西，因为他们发现世界并不是按照他们的想法去运转，他们的主观努力并不可以控制事态的变化。因此脆弱的人类由于自身的力量过于弱小，因此就去相信一些心理上的安慰。看看那些法轮功，香功的最初参加者就有很多现代医学无法救治的病人和长期受到病魔折磨的人。
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