yuhaichao10 发表于 2015-5-25 10:43:56

应王老师的要求,写一下5.23的作文回忆~

Issue

28) The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

当时遇到这题并没有觉得难写,因为题目中已经给了我分类的思路,于是我是这样写的:

认为题目所提及的四个方面对于great nation都不可或缺。

字数超过了屏幕,估计400多字应该没问题,但是中间段可能写得还是不够深刻~




Argument

78/114/116/117
The following appeared in a memo from the vice president of a food distribution company with food storage warehouses in several cities.
Recently, we signed a contract with the Fly-Away Pest Control Company to provide pest control services at our fast-food warehouse in Palm City, but last month we discovered that over $20,000 worth of food there had been destroyed by pest damage. Meanwhile, the Buzzoff Pest Control Company, which we have used for many years, continued to service our warehouse in Wintervale, and last month only $10,000 worth of the food stored there had been destroyed by pest damage. Even though the price charged by Fly-Away is considerably lower, our best means of saving money is to return to Buzzoff for all our pest control services.

写作指导是question类

题目并不难,但是我感觉自己写的还是有一点乱,而且question类之前没有特别练过。。。字数应该是刚刚超过屏幕的样子。。。



具体结果可能还得作文分数出来之后才能评价,我感觉这次Issue比Argument写的感觉要好,不知道为什么。。。

因为23号的考试被数学坑了,所以还准备在短时间再战一次,估计7月初左右,所以接下来时间还是希望花一点时间练习作文,可能还需要麻烦王老师指点~(但是由于6月专业考试比较多,可能写作文的频率较之前会降低。。)

iwishican 发表于 2015-5-25 13:23:46

你这两个都是高频题了。昨天我看到有一个是比较抽象的题那让人发麻。ISSUE38题。

iwishican 发表于 2015-5-25 13:25:33

不知道作文机经有没有用处啊,就是说考过的题目会连续考还是会停一段时间?昨天有好几个作文题。

tesolchina 发表于 2015-5-25 13:33:01

个人觉得issue 28其实挺不好写的  你觉得写的顺就好  记得你的主旨句是什么么 最主要是不要自相矛盾就好了  
回头看看我写的issue 28 忍不住自我欣赏一番 :p

https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=1777232&page=16#pid1779293370

tesolchina 发表于 2015-6-3 08:12:51

楼主考得怎么样?

yuhaichao10 发表于 2015-6-3 08:24:05

tesolchina 发表于 2015-6-3 08:12 static/image/common/back.gif
楼主考得怎么样?

表示还是3.0,估计这次是被argument拖了,当时写完就觉得A没I写得好...T_T
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