第一次在pp3练习，怕怕的，还有10天了，issue226,arg154,大家打个分吧，看看有没
226"People are mistaken when they assume that the problems they confront are more complex and challenging than the problems faced by their predecessors. This illusion is eventually dispelled with increased knowledge and experience."We usually judge problems confronting us more complex and challenging than those of the past, because it is natural to consider the problems based on what is used to be, and thus they should reflect more respects of the society, and need more ability and energy to solve them. However, with increased knowledge and experience, the arguer claims that this more complex and challenging problems could be dispelled in the long run. As far as I am concerned, while it is true that we could solve and settle many problems which might not been settled by our predecessors by the more advanced technological means, the fact that problems will never perish from the world, from when human beings have come into being.
First of all, let us get down to the reason why we consider problems we confront nowadays, seem more complex and challenging than ever before. In an era of more civilized and quickening pace modern society, many old problems have been already solved, while at the same time, new problems appear and make trouble with us. Since we never encounter and confront this recently appearing problems, we usually define them with more complex and challenging ones than those confronted by our predecessors. Considering the current problems obsessing with us: the pollution problems caused by industrial revolution and technology progress, which never appear to our predecessors, seem hard to solve; in the case of medical technology, vital ethical issue must be addressed such as the impact from the clone, genetic engineering, etc. After all, humans today concern the problems they confront with more complex and challenging in that they never encounter such problems before and have good reason to wonder, to suspect, to hesitate.
Additionally, with increasing knowledge and experience, many people are optimistic about the future of our human beings, because they hold that problems would seem simple and less complex. In my point of view, however, admitting that we should be optimistic about the future, we should neglect the fact that problems will and should never become easier and simper because newly appearing problems need more intelligence and courage for us to settle them. When we define the question of hardship, not only do we consider and judge the problem itself, but also, and most importantly, should take the condition of that time as well as the ability of people who are going to solve them into account. In this sense, we should never separate the complexity of a problem with the time and society. For example, no one probably think the travel to the moon is challenging for human beings to achieve, but think about our predecessors, it is hard to imagine the fly in the sky with the help of aeroplane, let alone the dream of flying to the moon. Similarly, it is because we can not easily solve the problems that we define them more complex and challenging. But those problems would seem too simple and easy for our future generation to settle.
To sum up, while the speaker argues that we human beings could settle most of our problems--less complex and challenging ones with the help of our experience and knowledge. I strongly believe the inherent complexity lying in the nature of problems will never perish because we cannot avoid meeting new problems which we never encountered before and naturally seem hard and complex for us to solve. More importantly, however, is that we human being should never hesitate in making decision and use our witness to solve them. 226"People are mistaken when they assume that the problems they confront are more complex and challenging than the problems faced by their predecessors. This illusion is eventually dispelled with increased knowledge and experience."
We usually judge problems confronting us more complex and challenging than those of the past, because it is natural to consider the problems based on what is used to be, and thus they should reflect more respects (aspects吧？) of the society, and need more ability and energy to solve them. However, with increased knowledge and experience, the arguer claims that this more complex and challenging problems could be dispelled in the long run. As far as I am concerned, while it is true that we could solve and settle many problems which might not been settled by our predecessors by the more advanced technological means, the fact that （the fact is that 或者索性把the fact that 删了）problems will never perish from （perish可以这样用吗？）the world, from when human beings have come into being.
（这第一段的最后一句应该是反映作者观点的吧，题目中 This illusion is eventually dispelled with increased knowledge and experience的illusion指的是人们认为今天遇到的问题比以前的更难，并不是说increased knowledge and experience可以让problem perish。是不是有点跑题了？）
First of all, let us get down to the reason why we consider problems we confront nowadays, seem （, seem删）more complex and challenging than ever before. In an era of more civilized and quickening pace modern society, many old problems have been already solved, while at the same time, new problems appear and make trouble with us. Since we never encounter and confront this recently appearing problems, we usually define them with more complex and challenging ones than those confronted by our predecessors. Considering the current problems obsessing with us: the pollution problems caused by industrial revolution and technology progress, which never appear to our predecessors, seem hard to solve; in the case of medical technology, vital ethical issue must be addressed such as the impact from the clone, genetic engineering, etc. After all, humans today concern the problems they confront with more complex and challenging in that they never encounter such problems before and have good reason to wonder, to suspect, to hesitate. （这句话看不懂）
Additionally, with increasing knowledge and experience, many people are optimistic about the future of our human beings, because they hold that problems would seem simple and less complex. In my point of view, however, admitting that we should be optimistic about the future, we should neglect the fact that problems will and should never become easier and simper because newly appearing problems need more intelligence and courage for us to settle them. When we define the question of hardship, not only do we consider and judge the problem itself, but also, and most importantly, should take the condition of that time as well as the ability of people who are going to solve them into account. In this sense, we should never separate the complexity of a problem with the time and society. For example, no one probably think the travel to the moon is challenging for human beings to achieve, but think about our predecessors, it is hard to imagine the fly in the sky with the help of aeroplane, let alone the dream of flying to the moon. Similarly, it is because we can not easily solve the problems that we define them more complex and challenging. But those problems would seem too simple and easy for our future generation to settle.
To sum up, while the speaker argues that we human beings could settle most of our problems--less complex and challenging ones with the help of our experience and knowledge. I strongly believe the inherent complexity lying in the nature of problems will never perish because we cannot avoid meeting new problems which we never encountered before and naturally seem hard and complex for us to solve. More importantly, however, is that we human being should never hesitate in making decision and use our witness to solve them.（use our witness to solve them 什么意思？witness用错了吧）
（文章观点看起来是新的难的问题总会不断出现，但我们应该努力去解决，觉得还是略有点跑开了。）
一家之言，我还有16天考，昨天正好也贴了篇issue226，有空也给我提提意见吧。
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/showthread.php?s=&threadid=175453 226"People are mistaken when they assume that the problems they confront are more complex and challenging than the problems faced by their predecessors. This illusion is eventually dispelled with increased knowledge and experience."
这个题目mel mm写的曾经炒得很热哦~~你可以去看看~~
We usually judge problems confronting us more complex and challenging than those of the past, because it is natural to consider the problems based on what is used to be, and thus they should reflect more respects of the society, and need more ability and energy to solve them. However, with increased knowledge and experience, the arguer claims that this more complex and challenging problems could be dispelled in the long run. As far as I am concerned, while it is true that we could solve and settle many problems which might not been settled by our predecessors by the more advanced technological means, the fact that problems will never perish from the world, from when human beings have come into being.
写我们感到现在问题复杂的原因（ts给的很鲜明~~学习！！）
First of all, let us get down to the reason why we consider problems we confront nowadays, seem more complex and challenging than ever before. In an era of more civilized and quickening pace modern society, many old problems have been already solved, while at the same time, new problems appear and make trouble with us. Since we never encounter and confront this recently appearing problems, we usually define them with more complex and challenging ones than those confronted by our predecessors.（这个结论我赞同！） Considering the current problems obsessing with us: the pollution problems caused by industrial revolution and technology progress, which never appear to our predecessors, seem hard to solve; in the case of medical technology, vital ethical issue must be addressed such as the impact from the clone, genetic engineering, etc. （我觉得aids的例子更好~~）After all, humans today concern the problems they confront with more complex and challenging in that they never encounter such problems before and have good reason to wonder, to suspect, to hesitate. （写得很不错嘛！！但是就原因剖析来说，不够全面哦~~）
Additionally, with increasing knowledge and experience, many people are optimistic about the future of our human beings, because they hold that problems would seem simple and less complex. In my point of view, however, admitting that we should be optimistic about the future, we should neglect the fact that problems will and should never（句子不顺） become easier and simper（错词儿） because newly appearing problems need more intelligence and courage for us to settle them. When we define the question of hardship, not only do we consider and judge the problem itself, but also, and most importantly, should take the condition of that time as well as the ability of people who are going to solve them into account. In this sense, we should never separate the complexity of a problem with the time and society. For example, no one probably think the travel to the moon is challenging for human beings to achieve, but think about our predecessors, it is hard to imagine the fly in the sky with the help of aeroplane, let alone the dream of flying to the moon. Similarly, it is because we can not easily solve the problems that we define them more complex and challenging. But those problems would seem too simple and easy for our future generation to settle.理论很正确~~~~试图说明问题和时代是相应的~~~~~
To sum up, while the speaker argues that we human beings could settle most of our problems--less complex and challenging ones with the help of our experience and knowledge. I strongly believe the inherent complexity lying in the nature of problems will never perish because we cannot avoid meeting new problems which we never encountered before and naturally seem hard and complex for us to solve. More importantly, however, is that we human being should never hesitate in making decision and use our witness to solve them.
写得不错啊~~~段落严格的符合正规写法~~pf pf~~
好多长句子写的很顺畅~~比我的舒服多了~~~呵呵
我都没找出论证的毛病~~~只是body2 感觉说得再清楚直接一点就更好了~~~
呵呵~~
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