issue11 [上外]建立全球性大学的利弊，高频
------题目------All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems.
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1.让步式开头，论断有一定道理，但是不实际
2.诚然，这样的大学有助于集中各国的力量，研究出最有效的针对当前难题的解决方法。
3.反对理由1：人类的社会问题过于复杂，不是一所大学就能够解决的
4.反对理由2：发展中国家没有能力支持这样一所学校，可能最后沦为发达国家的学校
5.总结，应该加强全人类的合作，才能解决最难的社会问题。
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The speaker asserts that in order to engage students to deal with the world’s most persistent social problems, all the nation should support to development a global university, It might be tempting to agree with the speaker’s assert in the basis that in the modern society, more and more persistent society problems involve almost all the nations, and should be solved by the cooperation of the all nations. However, the speaker overlooks some certain actual factors, which result the proposal to an impossible mission.
Admittedly, this assert has considerable merit. If such university could be developed by all the nations in the world, we can concentrate the energy from all the nations to deal with the most persistent society problems. The university itself is a sign of the cooperation of all the human beings, which is demanded by the globalization of the modern society. In our times, just different from before, due to the ever-increasing technology, more and more society problems emerge in most nations, each nation attempt to solve the problem through the hard work of themselves. In the global university, we can engage students from all the nations, and we can study all the cases in the world, and study all the methods which are being using to solving the problem, we learn the ideas of other nations, and research out a most effective method to the most persistent society problem as an advise afforded to the governments of all the nations.
On the other hand are two compelling arguments that the speaker overlooks some certain actual factors. Such university is just idealism rather than realism. One such argument is that the most persistent problem in our times is too difficult for as to solve easily through a university. For example, the environment of the earth, which could be one of the most serious problems of our society, We can not make a special method to the governments to solve the problem easily; the reason is complex, so the solution is complex too. And the methods should be adopted are different, because of the different cases in the different nations. Even some of them, such as war, poverty, and hungry, can not been solved by some perfect methods forever, for the reason that these problems come from the natures of the human beings.It is most likely that the univertsity will be bogged into the endless debates of the too many ideas,and nothing will be researched out.
A second argument against the speaker` s position has to do with the different financial ability of the various nations. For example, the developing nations can not afford so much financial aids to support the development of such global university, and there are also fewer professors can anticipate the university who are from the developing nations. The result of the global university will become that the aids are from the developed nations, the professors are from the developed nations, and they solves the society problem of the developed nations. It is not the ultimate aim of the university. It becomes the university of the developed nations. In fact, the most persistent society problems mostly exist in the developing nation, in the rich nations, the government has the enough financial ability and enough energy to solve most of the persistent society.
In the final analysis, the initial aim of support to develop such a global university is benefit for the lives of all the human being. But it is only idealism. In fact, there too actual impedes to make such university become impossible, the most effective method to solve the most persistent problem is the cooperation of all the human beings, which should not be in the form of a global university. 我觉得文章的思路很清晰
我写这道题的提纲的时候就想不出什么好观点来
赞一个
我觉得尤其是你反对原因2说的实在是好，有力度，有深度
我就想不出来这么好的理由
呵呵，佩服一下
一个问题在语言上
再加强一下
而且
有两个错误一再在文章中出现，assert是动词，应该用assertion。social problems而不是society problems
另一个问题是你的每个段落开头的方式我觉得怎么有点像argument啊，呵呵
这个我也不知道好不好
如果能把开头写的更精彩我觉得文章就完美了
呵呵 恩，语言是个不小的问题，现在基本能限时成功，不过检查的时候，低级小毛病，惨不忍睹，不知道各位有没有同感？
这个开头方式我是模仿鬼子280篇上面的，应该问题不大吧
Re: issue11 [上外]建立全球性大学的利弊，高频
最初由 kevin_yk 发布------题目------
All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most ..
以下省略......
我感觉结尾很好,不只是一般的重复,而是更深了一步,总结得很好.
全文思路很清晰,语言流畅,kevin_yk指的语言问题是什么呢?
第二段举的几个例子非常好,但最后只有这句话指出了大学在这个问题上的不足It is most likely that the univertsity will be bogged into the endless debates of the too many ideas,and nothing will be researched out.
我想是不是可以再多说一些,比如,令专家和各种国际组织都头疼的社会问题,单单一所大学,凭它相对匮乏的研究力量和资金,怎么能更有效的解决这些问题呢云云-----指出了它的不可行性,会不会更有说服力呢
菜鸟之见,大家多讨论啊 写完扫了一下，觉得没什么问题了，复制到word里一看，很多简单地词都拼错，也许是打得太匆忙，看来得留5分钟左右来检查一下 BODY 2 里being using to solving?有这种表示方法，i have not seen this expression before there too actual impedes to make such university become impossible,这句话是不是有点问题？
兄弟，fundamentally 写的不错,有练习，就好
1楼是不是深受老外200的影响
反对理由二很熟悉啊 根据楼主的原告，我做了相应的修改，不知道怎么样，大体上是没有变动，我觉得要是我碰到这道题目，就参照这个提纲了，欢迎指教：The speaker asserts that in order to deal with the world's most persistent social problems,one global unversity should be developed by all nation's support in which students are engaged in solve all of these matters.It is might be temping to agree with the speaker's statement accoring to morden socity situation,more and more persistent social problems involve almost all nations,and should be revolved by the collaboration/cooperation of all nations.However,the speaker overlook some certain actual factors,which result in the proposal to an impossible mission.
Admittedly, there are many considerable merits that developing the global universty.if it is come to reality,we can concerntrate the power from all the participant nations to deal with the persistent social problems.the social problems is so complexed,no one nation can resolve all of them individually without any help or collbaration from the other nation.the university itself is a powerful sign of cooperation of human being,which is demanded by the globalization.In modern society,total different with the past,with the ever-increasing technology,more and more society problems emerge in most nations,such as industrilization,juvenile delinquency,poverty,drug,corruption.each nation attempt to sove these problems by their hard working.In the global university,we can engage the students to support these nation deal with the social problems who come from different nation and have various education back ground.through studying most cases and civilization of the participant nation,the students can give some important advice or methods to the government of the nations
On the other hand,there are two compelling arguments that the speaker overlook certain actual factors.Such gloabal university is just idealism rather than realism.one such argument is that most persistent problems is so hard to be solved easily only with support of the global university in our time.for example,the environment problem,which is the most serious problems that the society have to face.the technology pushes globalization,globalizaiton carrys out industrialization,industrialization produces pollution.all of these matters are the environment problem factors.hwo can we find an effective way to settle it only by one university?other society problems, such as war,poverty,nuclear threats,can not been resolved by some perfect advice or method forever.all of these matters come from the history of human being.it is most be likely that the global university will be bogged into the endless debatesof too many ideas, and nothing will be carried out.
Another argument against the speaker's statement is that how much finacial ability of the participant nations can afford for the development of the global university.money is always a sensitive factor for the actual project.it is impossible that there is one clear finacial sponsor standard for all the participant.as the current international rules,the developed nation will pay much more than the developing ones,then another problem has to be solved,how to share the power of the university?the university authorities can be a fair-play role during settle the world's most persistent social problems really?all of these doubts will destroy the university's function deadly.
In sum.the initial aim of support to develpo such a gloabal university is benefits for modern society,but it is only idealism without thinking about many factors.In facts,the most effective method to solve the the world's most persistent social problems is the cooperation of the human being,which should not be in the form of a global university.
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