issue41同主题 占星算命非主流 拍必回拍
41"Such nonmainstream areas of inquiry as astrology, fortune-telling, and psychic and paranormal pursuits play a vital role in society by satisfying human needs that are not addressed by mainstream science."In the era of rapid social and technological change leading to increasing life complexity and psychological displacement, some nonmainsream areas of inquiry play a vital role in society by satisfying human needs that are not addressed by mainstream science.
Before the concept of the science formed, our ancestors believed that the nature is controlled by God. Everyone should admire the God, and follow the God’s orders. Fetes were hold, people joined in and wished for better lives. This is people’s spirit lives in ancientry. Though there are different Gods in different races, there is no race without godliness. As a result, the godliness became a part of national culture. And there is a question that why all nations have their belief? This might be considered as human beings’ appetency, human beings want to explain all phenomenons. In the age of blindness, people have to contract the phenomenon to the God. Only to this way, balance could be found in human beings’ spirit. In nowadays, as the great development of science, people could explain mass of phenomenons by mainstream science in our world. However, there are still some phenomenons couldn’t be explained by science. Thanks to the nonmainstream areas of inquiry such as astrology, fortune-telling and so on, we could explain many of these phenomenons. Take the great predict as an example. An augur, who predicted the perdition of Roman Empire, predicted that the Judgment Day is in the year 1999 D.C. , and in that day, the nine Plants in solar system would line in a big cross. Obviously, the prediction is not total right, though some heavy earthquakes happened in 1999, people lives as before. But surprising, the nine Plants in solar system really line in a big cross, and this phenomenon is infrequency. Mainstream sciences will make people puzzled with the prediction. Certainly, for many people who want to explain this will turn to the astrology and fortune-telling. It could explain the phenomenon and be fit for satisfying human beings’ appetency. According to the example, the nonsmaintream areas of inquiry could not be instead of in nowadays.
Further more, mainstream science in nowadays couldn’t ensure that they would be true all the time. Mainstream and nonmainstream are opposite, not absolutely, they change along time. Just like the mainstream science in Middle Ages was not still strong as before Unfortunately, as presenters of nonmainstream science, many scientists whose views considered to be right in nowadays mainstream science were sentenced to death by inquisition in that age. No one can tell that what is the unshakeable truth, and nothing but only time works as merciless filter.
Sum up, the nonmainstream of areas of inquiry play a vital role in society. And modern society calls for catholicity to both mainstream and nonmainstream science. 41"Such nonmainstream areas of inquiry as astrology, fortune-telling, and psychic and paranormal pursuits play a vital role in society by satisfying human needs that are not addressed by mainstream science."
In the era of rapid social and technological change leading to increasing life complexity and psychological displacement, some nonmainsream areas of inquiry play a vital role in society by satisfying human needs that are not addressed by mainstream science.
//感觉第一段内容太少,最好不要和题目重合太多
Before the concept of the science formed, our ancestors believed that the nature is controlled by God. Everyone should admire the God, and follow the God’s orders. Fetes were hold, people joined in and wished for better lives. This is people’s spirit lives in ancientry. Though there are different Gods in different races, there is no race without godliness. As a result, the godliness became a part of national culture. And there is a question that why all nations have their belief? This might be considered as human beings’ appetency, human beings of wanting to explain all phenomenons. In the age of blindness, people have to contractcontact the phenomenon to the God. Only to in this way, balance could be found in human beings’ spirit. In nowadays, as the great development of science, people could explain mass of phenomenons by mainstream science in our world. However, there are still some phenomenons couldn’t be explained by science. Thanks to the nonmainstream areas of inquiry such as astrology, fortune-telling and so on, we could explain many of these phenomenons. Take the great predict as an example. An augur, who predicted the perdition of Roman Empire, predicted that the Judgment Day is in the year 1999 D.C. , and in that day, the nine Plants in solar system would line in a big cross. Obviously, the prediction is not total totallyright, though some heavy earthquakes happened in 1999, people lives live as before. But surprising surprisingly, the nine Plants in solar system really line in a big cross, and this phenomenon is infrequency. Mainstream sciences will make people puzzled with the prediction. Certainly, for many people who want to explain this will turn to the astrology and fortune-telling. It could explain the phenomenon and be fit for satisfying human beings’ appetency. According to the example, the nonsmaintream areas of inquiry could not be instead of in nowadays.
//段首最好把中心句写出来，感觉显得挺散。
Further more, mainstream science in nowadays couldn’t ensure that they would be true all the time. Mainstream and nonmainstream are opposite, not absolutely, they change along time. Just like the mainstream science in Middle Ages was not still strong as before Unfortunately, as presenters of nonmainstream science, many scientists whose views considered to be right in nowadays mainstream science were sentenced to death by inquisition in that age. No one can tell that what is the unshakeable truth, and nothing but only time works as merciless filter.
Sum up, the nonmainstream of areas of inquiry play a vital role in society. And modern society calls for catholicity to both mainstream and nonmainstream science.
//换次来表达, vital role- fundanmental role- essential element
//总体感觉最好是驳斥题目的观点,即论述占星术不是必不可少的,否则的话不好展开.
中间段落只有两个显得有点薄弱. 谢谢修改～ 学习中
我会好好修改 不必多谢，请回拍，呵呵。
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