issue141 指教。
ISSUE 141- "Most people recognize the benefits of individuality, but the fact is that personal economic success requires conformity."
WORDS：629 TIME：0:45:00 DATE：2006-2-10
Admittedly, individuality plays a crucial role in the process of pursuing personal economic success. However, we should not pay too much emphasis on individuality, while overlook the importance of conformity. Actually, only striking a balance between individuality and conformity can people obtain the ultimate economic success..
To begin with, individuality acts as a critical merit, which means innovation and breakthroughs. People, with individuality, own the most precious personalities, such as enterprise, unique perspectives, and so forth. Anyone who wants to surpass the majority of people and then get the economic success should have the ability to observe the world with a completely new angle and see further than the ordinary persons. In the business realm, individuality is even more important than any other fields with so many competitions and challenges. Only people with insightful economic strategy will manage to create a innovation, grasp the precious chances and then get the most of profits. Take Dell for example, who put up the second largest computer company in the world. Thanks to his outstanding individuality, Dell created a new and innovative method of selling computers. Unlike the other companies, Dell sells computers directly to the customers. In this way, both the company and the customers will be able to get more benefits. In fact, it is the new economic strategy that helps the company create a broader market of computers and also offers Dell the economic success. Individuality, as it stands, always plays a crucial role when people want to gain their personal economic success, providing the different perspectives, which are the guarantee of new innovations.
However, just relying on individuality, no one will get economic success, since there is a long to go between individuality and success and thee bridge is conformity. Individuality offers new ideas and unique understandings of outstanding persons. Yet, only by innovative perspectives, economic success will not come to your pocket by itself. Instead, more cooperation work is needed in order to make those striking ideas come into true. It is hard to imagine how can Dell make personal economic success if he did all by himself without any help from others, though he owned the most update economic strategy. He needs numerous people to help him realize the dream and obtain the success. Some people make suggestions of how to design the computers, some do their best to build every part of computers, and others may need to communicate with those customers and do the service for them. In fact, the success cannot be separated from the hard work of any of these people, besides the individuality of Dell. There are many other examples in other fields, from which we may know that the conformity makes the great benefits of individual change into the success of economic.
Actually, anyone who really want to get personal economic success should get a balance between individuality and conformity. The ultimate success calls for the cooperation of the two. Individuality is the fire, which stimulates the innovative perspectives; while the conformity is the wood, which is the guarantee for the realizing of economic success. Only by individuality, everything would always stand at the stage of thinking. New ideas need the hard work of the majority of people, especially those trifling ones. On the contrary, only by conformity, there would be no breakthroughs and no innovations and no one would have the chance to put his own perspectives onto the stage of life. Thus, neither of individuality and conformity can be overlooked or overemphasized.
In sum, everyone who wants to get the personal economic success should pay enough emphasis on both the individuality and conformity. New innovations and teamwork are all crucial in the process of pursuing success. Success will never come into true without any of the two.
[ 本帖最后由 iq28 于 2007-6-26 03:52 编辑 ] 俺来顶一顶。嘿嘿留连接。考完来拍。 没人看。。哭 看了~~
小小.说实话,写得真好~!! 特别是第一段.
小小的作文又进步了那, 无论是语言还是结构~~~
字数啊.........
有写小错. 如a long way to go (这种错不划算哦), 还有说集体的感觉单薄了点. 观点有点重复~~~
小小有话说真羡慕~~ ......研究下, 还有一点~~
conformity 就等于集体??
即使可以画等号, 但是也要提个过渡的比较好~
直接这样说有点"偏题"~~
呵呵....
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