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标题: 5T同主题写作第1期--topic: 5(请大家不要把全文贴出来,请给出链接 谢谢!!)
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5T同主题写作第1期--topic: 5(请大家不要把全文贴出来,请给出链接 谢谢!!)

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5.A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.

分析: 此题目是01年5月的试题,在题库中同类型的题目为16,25,26,30,79(25题曾在00年10月考过)
题目分析: 一个公司要在你家附近建一个大工厂,讨论好处和坏处.你是同意还是反对,阐述原因.
此题目属于综合类,即让你提出对此观点是否赞同,然后给出或之前给出论据.篇章结构可以按以下来写:
第1段: 引言 (概述题目,表达观点:支持或反对)
第2段:支持1
第3段:支持2
第4段:反对1
....
第5段:结论

思路: 看了题目后先想一下,假如工厂建成了,好处和坏处分别有哪些?
    如: 好处--增加就业/带动地方经济/人口迁入/...
         坏处--污染环境/噪音污染/建工厂不一定会盈利
      然后综述

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请大家列提纲的题目有: 178(同类型的有159)
                                11(同类型的有19,95,100)
                                6
                                15(同类型的有18,22,46,62,93,103,179)

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5. A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
  
Recently, an ardent debate that whether a factory should be set up or not in my community has been brought into focus for the simple reason that the construction would have both positive and negative effects. From my perspective, however, the risks of having a factory are outweighed by the benefits it can offer us. These reasons below are why I support this plan.

As far as I am concerned, the best thing that establishment could boost the development of our town’s economy by paying a great number of taxes with which the local government may construct more welfare systems and fundamental constructions, and by stimulating the progress of interrelated industries.

What is more, another benefit the factory can bring us is creating more opportunities for employments which is just what we need in such a high competitive society that, not mention those people who lost their job, even those graduated students can hardly find a job. The vacancies of jobs which the factory provides not only give them more chance to be employed, but also improve the quality of their life.

In addition to steady employments and economy development, great change in transportation would occur after the construction of the factory. The needs of support of transporting is indispensable in such a large-scale factory that virtually they must focus on the improvement of traffic at the same time that we can also benefit from it.           

Of course, I have to admit that setting up a new factory may cause some problems. Hardly can a factory be established without contaminating the living environment of our community’s inhabitants to some degree, moreover, it may create extra noise and traffic problems. Weigh both the advantages and disadvantages, however, I strongly hold the opinion that with the well management and supervision, building this factory will benefit us and our community.

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