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这个题目真难写 大家讨论下

In today'world, to speak well is more importance than to write well, agree or disagree寄托家园,C T+qA5P#C
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Speaking is the process of communication with others and transmitting information
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First of all, various kinds of books that recorded down a large number of the accumulated knowledgeand experiences are very necessary and crucial part of resource in that we can learn much useful skills,belief andthought. an excellence compositing skill would make what books include more smooth, easy understanding and critical. For instance, lovers of philosophy can take a good understanding of Plato'theory or Socrate'theory in deep way by comprehensive of what words express.When a travel writer got into a beautiful place, if she or he had a sense of sensitiveness, she or he can use a lively language to record what she or he perceives and what she or he touches by the usage of writing on booknote Therefore, writing well would make our life more funny and colorful.
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In addition, I perfer to writing something when I am alonely, happy and sad. There is a specific thing peoplecan not express under the help of language,they are emotion and desire and appetite.any speak seem very meaningless and redundant.In this situation, I like to write down my mood and feels.these which I recorded may turn into forever memories for some special days. Moreover,
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If I could not speak very well, or this means some misunderstand with other people, but to some degree,this is not very importance to myself because I can speak few.
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会说话比会写作重要寄托家园g5NoPX'ToBF
1. 讲话和写作都能交流思想,但是讲话与听者面对面,讲得好会更有感染力。
ZxoPv/L3c7`E2. 讲话比写作节省时间,符合现代社会的生存之道。留学,考试,TOEFL,GRE,GMAT,IELTS,SAT,VISA,文书,签证,论坛,出国,申请,美国,英国,欧洲,加拿大,USAz KSX^P h9L9Y:tc`^
3. 有的时候直接说话比写信、公布日记的方式更加有诚意,必须讲话才能达成效果。留学,考试,TOEFL,GRE,GMAT,IELTS,SAT,VISA,文书,签证,论坛,出国,申请,美国,英国,欧洲,加拿大,USA!|`\V.JC1E

s{ N+?0z jbbs.gter.net楼主的两点和“现代社会”这个切题点没有关系,写得些许跑题了,也是因为这个原因才找不出观点。下次注意审题,另外注意研究OG(官方指南,超级入口中有下载)上的口语、作文评分准则,切题来做。——一来帮助高分,二来也帮助扩展思路。




Nothing is so strong as gentleness and nothing is so gentle as real strength.
人本身都不坚强。为了别人,就能坚强。
成功的两个基本条件:1、单纯,热情。2、了解现实,并超越现实。
女性的美,应该像小溪一样,柔和清浅,然源远流长。
优点语法错误逻辑谈心
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最后,注意要写结尾段。外国人也很讲究有始有终的。




Nothing is so strong as gentleness and nothing is so gentle as real strength.
人本身都不坚强。为了别人,就能坚强。
成功的两个基本条件:1、单纯,热情。2、了解现实,并超越现实。
女性的美,应该像小溪一样,柔和清浅,然源远流长。
优点语法错误逻辑谈心
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平衡观点: 二者没有谁更重要之说留学,考试,TOEFL,GRE,GMAT,IELTS,SAT,VISA,文书,签证,论坛,出国,申请,美国,英国,欧洲,加拿大,USAA6}aL        J4^
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1, 的确说话很重要, 没有语言就没有人类社会bbs.gter.netdeb$BO a)RU
2, 写作同样重要, 历史纪录, 文学, 新闻
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反面观点: 写作更重要
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2, 写作自成体系, 严谨而且有效, 应用范围更广, 可以成为复杂的学术体系, 而说话只是一种交流模式, 一种工具留学,考试,TOEFL,GRE,GMAT,IELTS,SAT,VISA,文书,签证,论坛,出国,申请,美国,英国,欧洲,加拿大,USA'V+?(f$bmc4J? PG
3, 写作能够流传为后人所知, 成为社会财富的一部分, 而说话转瞬即逝




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貌似是我当时考的作文题留学,考试,TOEFL,GRE,GMAT,IELTS,SAT,VISA,文书,签证,论坛,出国,申请,美国,英国,欧洲,加拿大,USADK
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8[5bt7IfJM%Cbbs.gter.net我用的是4楼的平衡观点.感觉两个都强调要容易写点
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There is a specific thing peoplecan not express under the help of language,they are emotion and desire and appetite.
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to write well is more importance than to speak well
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(P&A n!u#^^In modern society, writing reports is an essential skill for the employers to show their perfoemance to the supervisor in the company




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发表于 2007-6-10 19:14  资料 短消息 
我是这样写的,请牛人指点

我这样写的,写之前没有看上面的思路,觉得很难写。
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In today’s world, to speak well is more important than to write will, agree or disagree?
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Our world presently is experiencing a rapidly change in every aspect of people’s mind, economic situation and social structure. This tendency requires people’s reaction much quicker than before they did. Therefore, speak well is undoubted to be of vital importance. Only if you communicate with others more easily, could you obtain those opportunities easier.留学,考试,TOEFL,GRE,GMAT,IELTS,SAT,VISA,文书,签证,论坛,出国,申请,美国,英国,欧洲,加拿大,USAzpI!F"g J
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The first and foremost reason I commit to the notion is that speaking well can impress others deeply and that is essential in contemporary world. Take hunting job as an example. The youth nowadays may not do a job for their entire life, they may change job frequently. As a result, every time when they try to find a job in a company or government, they have to answer the boss’s question face to face. Obviously, this step can not be done by writing. If someone is good at speaking, he/she may leave a deep impression to the boss and win a better chance to work, which is impossible for those people who are good at writing. Therefore, from this angle, to speak well is more important than to write well.
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Another reason I think to speak well is more important is that it is a better way to communicate with others compared with writing. Needless to say, we must communicate with different people in our daily life and in the harness in today’s world because we have to contact more persons than in the past decades we did. And the technology is developed and advanced, which allows to us talk to anyone wherever they are. To make the communication goes well, we must focus on our skills of speaking. We had better to make our efforts to sound enthusiastic, warm and trustable and to explain something more clearly. |留学|签证|TOEFL|GRE
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S8sYt!o|留学|签证|TOEFL|GREAdmittedly, to writing well is also important, but it always is a indirect means to communicate with people, besides, nowadays people do not like writing to discuss something, they may feel it is too troublesome. It is easy to imagine that whether a person prefer talking something to others directly by phone or write to the people and wait the reply in another several days.
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Consequently, with all the dimensions mentioned above, to speak well must be put to the top priory.
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发表于 2007-6-10 22:14  资料 短消息 
speak well is undoubted to be of vital importance. vital 与importance 重复{ S%O2J\+K}
文章逻辑较强,但例子不是很支持论点。
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谢谢指教,我30分钟差点没写完,主要都用到想例子上面了。要是你们写,写什么例子和论点啊?
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