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There are some advantages that children are influenced by their classmates in school. For instance, they can talk with each other without generation gap, or discuss studying issues together. So, some people argue that the influence of classmates on the children is more important than that from the parents. However, I do not agree the statement for several reasons.留学,考试,TOEFL,GRE,GMAT,IELTS,SAT,VISA,文书,签证,论坛,出国,申请,美国,英国,欧洲,加拿大,USA*_d!P#E ?A:\
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On the other hand, the children always live with their parents much more long time than that with their classmates. Thus, the parents understand their children much more deeply than the classmates. For example, the parents know the habit of the children's diet and can prepare the delicious and health food they like for the children. Also, if the child is a deficient kid, the parents know how to take care of the child better.
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v,?kk]x\The last but not the least, the affection from the parents to the children cannot be replaced by their classmates. The parents are always paying theirs affection to their children without any conservation. Nevertheless, the classmates cannot do this because they are not relationship and they always have the personal desires which may cause conflicts with others.
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In summary, although the classmates can discuss studying issues together and talk with each other without generation gap, the influence of them is no more important than the one from the parents for the sophistication, understanding, and affection of parents.
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