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U|Rl+S寄托家园My hometown is a samall town in the south of China,it is famous of kingkgo. A TOWN OF GINGKGOs is its another name.Every fall, the gingkgo trees in here lost their leaves,most of them are laden with drupe.This is very beautiful landscape,if you raise your head, you will find there are so many yellow pulps which hide in the trees.the yellow skin of the pulp is wrinkled ,soft,but the seed husk is very hard and creamy white, and shaped like a almond.The gingkgo nuts taste very good.Because of its nutrition ,it is the hingh-grade food in china.can be fried ,roasted,stewed.One of my favorite snacks are gingkgo nuts which are roasted by microwave oven. In additon to being a source of food,the gingkgo has healing qualities as well.Gingkgo’s leaves have been used in  medicine to improve the Cardiovascular circulation and reduce blood pressure.,they can be made into teas, pills by traditional or scientific tenchnic methods.bbs.gter.net)omsVw5Y
Another reason why the gingkgo is one of the important plants in my cluture is that it is a tree that in on the verge of extinction;however ,it has a long and great history.Scientists have traced this curious creature’s roots back to the time of the dinosaurs,hundreds of thoustands years ago.Because of this long history, the gingkgo has been termed the ‘living fossil’.Today, scients can study the gingkgo and discover many interesting facts about the history of our planet and its habitats.
@:q5Z^'uUbx%?bbs.gter.netIn conclusion I poist that the gingkgo plays a significant role in the life and culture of chinese people, and not only is the gingkgo the symbol of my hometown ,but also the national iconic symbol of china.

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China’s(Chinese) cluture has always had(has always) an intimate relationship with nature. This can be seen in many aspects of Chinese cluture(不能老用同样的词,而且是再一段中,适当替换下),from herbal medicines to intricate Chinese gardens.As for me , the most important plant in my cluture(our cluture或者Chinese cluture,culture不应该属于个人吧,最少要一个小群体才能算culture,个人的叫habit) is the gingkgo (请教:这个词什么意思?).
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My hometown is a samall town(改成is smal而且small还misspelll) ,in the south of China,(去掉都好加个and)it is famous of kingkgo. A TOWN OF GINGKGOs is its another name(as known by the name of...不是说看过新概念么,应该这么用才对).Every fall(建议这个放本句最后说), the gingkgo trees in here lost their leaves,most of them are laden with drupe.This is very beautiful landscape(典型chinglish,This landscape is very beautiful),if you raise your head(raise your head up then) you will(如果你前面用if虚拟语气这里应该是would) find there are so many yellow pulps which hide in(on) the trees.the yellow skin of the pulp is wrinkled ,soft,but the seed husk is very hard and creamy white, and shaped like a almond.The gingkgo nuts taste very good.Because of its nutrition(逻辑问题,有营养不见得好吃,不能用because连接) ,it is the hingh(misspell)-grade food in china.can be fried ,roasted,stewed.One of my favorite snacks are gingkgo nuts which are roasted by microwave oven. In additon to being a source of food,the gingkgo has healing qualities as well.Gingkgo’s leaves have been used in  medicine to improve the Cardiovascular circulation and reduce blood pressure.,they can be made into(逻辑混乱drink as 或者make as 不能说被做到茶里面去,而且tea为什么要复数) teas, pills by traditional or scientific tenchnic methods.

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