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发表于 2007-5-11 21:38  资料 短消息 
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如果给你一片土地,你会用它来干什么? LD8b`K1A
As the quick development of economic in urban, the land underuse is decline even faster. However, most of the land is used to build buildings, green ground, and so forth. If I were given a land, I will build a sports court on it. The appearance of the large sports court would offer people a place to do sports gamed, to communicate and to relax their tired mind.
Y WcP,B.S6CPeople in our community of my age, around 20, seldom have a chance to exercise in the sports court. All the free fields that only opened to students are owned by school. We do not have any chance to use it even if once we have read in the school. For the local people, the new project must be good news. We could play football, basket ball, and if one like, he/she can keep on running without worrying about being driving out.
e#G{e2`留学,考试,TOEFL,GRE,GMAT,IELTS,SAT,VISA,文书,签证,论坛,出国,申请,美国,英国,欧洲,加拿大,USAThe sports court would also be an ideal place to communicate for my neighborhoods. Nowadays, little space is left for people to have free talk. Compared to the business man who makes their deals in restaurant, the ordinary people seldom have a quiet place to talk with each other. The benches around the court give people a chance to speak and at the same time they can enjoy the football game.
'glD0K8CT寄托家园There is no doubt that people of our age suffer great pressure. People always worry about the questions like company positions, rage rise, and even the rewards from the government. These questions can never be worked out because we have no idea what we want tomorrow. Maybe walking around the court can keep us away from the boring problems for a short time. I am sure people would only enjoy the place to relax their stress.
e(?*x-i6Sp/pOverall, I would like to turn my land into a public place where I could share my own pleasure with other people and meanwhile people could really enjoy their time here
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发表于 2007-5-11 22:05  资料 短消息 
help .the right direction of writing ,and my exercise

如果给你一片土地,你会用它来干什么?1vJ&c.h(o4K^9]
As the quick development of economic in urban, the land underuse is decline even faster. However, most of the land is used to build buildings, green ground, and so forth. If I were given a land, I will build a sports court on it. The appearance of the large sports court would offer people a place to do sports gamed, to communicate and to relax their tired mind.
LL w9I w.uD hy o寄托家园People in our community of my age, around 20, seldom have a chance to exercise in the sports court. All the free fields that only opened to students are owned by school. We do not have any chance to use it even if once we have read in the school. For the local people, the new project must be good news. We could play football, basket ball, and if one like, he/she can keep on running without worrying about being driving out.5AY*|        FP.n%G
The sports court would also be an ideal place to communicate for my neighborhoods. Nowadays, little space is left for people to have free talk. Compared to the business man who makes their deals in restaurant, the ordinary people seldom have a quiet place to talk with each other. The benches around the court give people a chance to speak and at the same time they can enjoy the football game.I5~V\(I
There is no doubt that people of our age suffer great pressure. People always worry about the questions like company positions, rage rise, and even the rewards from the government. These questions can never be worked out because we have no idea what we want tomorrow. Maybe walking around the court can keep us away from the boring problems for a short time. I am sure people would only enjoy the place to relax their stress.2Q9ARUF
Overall, I would like to turn my land into a public place where I could share my own pleasure with other people and meanwhile people could really enjoy their time here
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发表于 2007-5-16 23:03  资料 短消息 
As the quick development of economic in urban, the land under use is decline even faster.
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However, most of the land is used to build buildings, green ground, and so forth. If I were given a land, I will build a sports court on it. The appearance of the large sports court would offer people a place to do sports gamed, to communicate and to relax their tired mind.
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All the free fields that only opened to students are owned by school. We do not have any chance to use it even if once we have read in the school. For the local people, the new project must be good news. We could play football, basket ball, and if one like, he/she can keep on running without worrying about being driving out.
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There is no doubt that people of our age suffer great pressure. People always worry about the questions like company positions, rage rise, and even the rewards from the government. These questions can never be worked out because we have no idea what we want tomorrow. Maybe walking around the court can keep us away from the boring problems for a short time.bbs.gter.netn        @|N;s%q
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(a place of this kind can disengage us momentarily from all these worldly concerns) I am sure people would only enjoy the place to relax their stress.FQ&Q.N:M6CvdN!N
Overall, I would like to turn my land into a public place where I could share my own pleasure with other people and meanwhile people could really enjoy (their time here)(themselves there)
$BJ'B:EU.w1kt*w7oD寄托家园Such elements as grammar, structure, the essential meaning of an example for foreign readers should be focused on so that it can be convincing and readable.
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