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Do you still remember the new clothes as a present which you have already liked given by your mother? Do you still remember the first flower from your lover for love? Do you still remember the big surprise as a present for greeting your eighteen years old birthday from your friends? I believe that everyone have been received a number of presents regardless of big or small, cheap or dear, which there must be special to all of us. When we have a look at these gifts, some memories which are special for us will come back and take us to the good time. 寄托家园o
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I agree that subjects such as art, music and drama should be a part of every child`s basic education. Scientists found that young children who study art and music in school do better in their other studies. That argument aside, we should study art, music and drama to learn more about ourselves, our culture and our world.)Z&w^![4Px&m
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All of the three subjects stimulate children`s imaginations and let them express their emotion better than the children who do not study these subjects. The children who learn a lot of knowledge can express their feeling in varies of ways, such as singing a song ,drawing a picture, playing a character and so on. And they are better than just saying something. Because they are more personal and people are easily moved.
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In addition, art and music or drama give you modern life and you are not behind the world and chase the fashion. I can not image what the world would be like if there is no pop music, I think people`s life must be single and aridity. It must lose a lot of fun in my life.
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Special gifts people have received give them a beautiful memory which carved in their heart forever. It might be a present from friends that bring them a lot fun, it also might be from their parents, and it even from a stranger but it changed their life. As an impressive part in memory, they deserve remember these treasure gifts.
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Sometimes the gift exists in another type such as helps coming from a stranger. In other word, it could seem as a blessing gift from god. For example, the help from charity associations that scatter globally make great contributions on improving innumerable people in poverty. They donate billions of dollars on education to ensure children have as the same opportunity as us to receive formal compulsory education, besides they develop sanitation conditions to offer better medicine equipment in order to decrease the rate of death. Moreover, they invest much money on local basic construction such as expend transportation network, pipe drainage and build hospitals. Maybe it seems not a gift like football, but to some degree, it is the greatest gift to poor people. When they obtain good education they can enter in university to absorb more knowledge and find a decent job. When they receive better care in hospital, they would prolong their life. When transportation network expend, local economy would soar up.
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And also in leisure time some people often prefer listening music or visiting museums to find inspirations for their career. That is to say, sometimes, art could inspire people to think out novelty ideas. For instance, Albert Einstein has said music helped him a lot while he formulating relative theory. Besides, to me, listening music is my first choice to relax. When I am exhausted, wearing headphone and immersing in music for a while is the most effective way to let me fresh back.
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The lecturer talks about history of travel. People hold different goals to travel in different ages. In the past people have a travel for political and economic reasons, but now their goal become more specific like for adventure and enrichment. This is similar to the reading material, early people went out for search resources and later tourists took trips for cultural, educational, and scientific purposes.
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And the ethnic tourism, a kind of culture tourism, people goes to traditional villages to visit native people's house and experience their culture. Like folk music, dancers and ceremony. Another one is environment tourism, which is related to ethnic tourism. People visit some places where few people have gone before. They enjoy nature sceneries and observe the wildlife.

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    The special gifts will bring people something else more than the presents themselves. For example, children in poor families aided by anonymous people and then finished their college education eventually, they learned to appreciate what they got and will work more hard to feedback to our society and be willing to help others who are in the familiar situation as they were. The meaning of the good and amplified effects is far more precious than the money funded to the children's education. People will remember and take those who send the gifts to them as special friends. Give myself as an example, the stamp made our friendship to a higher level. (这句有些多余)So if you select a special present for your friend, you will be remembered as his or her special friend.bbs.gter.net+y$K9fD._bZdK
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     Every child is encouraged to have balanced development（这个词用得好） in their study. Therefore, some subjects such as art, music and drama should be strongly recommended to be a part of every child's basic education.
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     Art, music and drama will lead children to a world which is totally different with the realm of science. The irregular patterns with a kaleidoscope of color make children understand that besides the rigid reasoning, the compositions without any rules are also wonderful. Listening to some classical music will loose their nervous minds after long periods of memorizing monotonous formula. Taking a role in a drama and pretending to be someone else is really interesting experience, children can also learn to stand on others' positions and are willing to understand other people. bbs.gter.netWFcz9N8Y(y[i
   
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q:G5kk8XV寄托家园     In other respect, children may find some inspiration when they emerge themselves into the world of art, music and drama. Free forms of art will provide children with more spaces of imagination. Sometimes imagination is more important than knowledge itself. It is said that Einstein got the inspiration for his special theory of relativity when he was playing the violin. Cultivating children to develop their imagination is more important than just teaching them some abstract theories. Therefore, taking the courses are(is) very necessary for the children.  
ju4g"`#TX#x寄托家园    In short, children learn to appreciate the beauty of the world by participating the courses of art, music and drama, their lives are more colorful than that of without those.

还不错 如果再用一些具体的例子就好了,开头和结尾都有些单薄啊

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1.social roles 语速语调都很不错的，说的时候思路应该是把阅读和lecture结合比较说 ，哪个观点时lecture的什莫例子

2。career workshop 很好，思路清晰，分三点，都说全了

3。gesture 后面快结束时有些急了， 还可以再说一句的

4 transportation 很好

5sleep 很显然好像不太熟，停顿多，电脑的例子有的时间太长，以后要对各个部分时间控制好，多说或少说

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