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As our society moving forward, demand of versatile people is roaring. So personally, I believe authority should make a great decision of fueling subjects such as art, music and drama become a part of every child's basic education, although it seems would encounter many obstacles when implement this policy.
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H0]{{lI寄托家园Currently, implement this policy in one country is quite reluctant especially in poor education areas and it is still a controversial issue in public. People with different intentions hold different perspectives. From my perspective, its strength could cover all aspects in many ways. Consequently, the superiority in its way of practical adopting is hence guaranteed and authority should add art, music and drama to be a part of every child’s basic education.

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The lecturer talks about history of travel. People hold different goals to travel in different ages. In the past people have a travel for political and economic reasons, but now their goal become more specific like for adventure and enrichment. This is similar to the reading material, early people went out for search resources and later tourists took trips for cultural, educational, and scientific purposes.bbs.gter.netB7z+bKG
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    What kind of gift or present is special? The answer is varied on different people. A special present may be the one that people need very badly. The children living in poor families will take a new bag as a very cherished present, while to those who living in wealthy families, a new bag is quite common and no any interesting. A special present also could be the one bring people some special feelings. Three years ago, one of my best friends decided to move to another city. I carved his name on a stamp and sent to him as a gift. Till now I remembered his surprised expression when he open(opens) the small box and saw the stamp. We've talked about the stamp in the phone two days ago, he said he showed off the stamp to his friends there. Therefore, a special present needn't to be some expensive ones, when you put your heartly (heartily) wishes into the present, it is special.
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    The special gifts will bring people something else more than the presents themselves. For example, children in poor families aided by anonymous people and then finished their college education eventually, they learned to appreciate what they got and will work more hard to feedback to our society and be willing to help others who are in the familiar situation as they were. The meaning of the good and amplified effects is far more precious than the money funded to the children's education. People will remember and take those who send the gifts to them as special friends. Give myself as an example, the stamp made our friendship to a higher level. So if you select a special present for your friend, you will be remembered as his or her special friend.   

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     Art, music and drama will lead children to a world which is totally different with the realm of science. The irregular patterns with a kaleidoscope of color make children understand that besides the rigid reasoning, the compositions without any rules are also wonderful. Listening to some classical music will loose their nervous minds after long periods of memorizing monotonous formula. Taking a role in a drama and pretending to be someone else is really interesting experience,( children can also learn to stand on others' positions and are willing to understand other people. qM5MG)]V!G&{2Nj%T
   
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On one hand, some gifts remind us of great events happened in our lives. A birthday gift recalls happy time when we (are)at different ages. An anniversary gift looks back on every memorable event in the past year. (这句话的意思不明白)When we graduate—no matter we shall go further education or begin to work, we may receive gifts as well. These gifts are full of bless and great joy.  One of my most memorable gifts is a Bobby toy. Dan（Dad）and mom gave me the Bobby toy after I won the first prize on a rhythm gymnastic competition. I valued this gift not because of it was a Bobby toy which I yearned for a long time. I valued it because it embodied their inspiration and encouragement to me. Also, every time I look at the Bobby, it evokes that glory time.

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On the other hand, some gifts become our precious memories about some people. For example, when I graduated from high school, my Chinese teacher gave me a card as a present. In the card, she wrote some word(s) to express good will to me and wish me have a promising future. Even after years, I can still remember, in the high school, how she taught me patiently at (with)the merely have a glimpse at this card.  Another case is a book, which written by one author I admire so much. Last year, I had an occasional(去掉，语义重复) chance to have a quick talk with him. After the conversation, he gave me the book as a gift. Apparently, this book records the exciting talk and the kindness he was （of him）. One more good case is a wallet I use now. It is a valentine gift given by my ex boyfriend. Although we have broken up for many reasons, the wallet always tells me we did have a happy time.

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The professor echoes these facts, and then further discusses the influence on tourism by Ernest Hemingway. He also talks about some changes in tourism today. He says that tourists today having trips are for pleasure and recreation rather than conquering or controlling the natural. Nowadays, many new kinds of tourisms come out. One is the ethnic tourism and another is environmental tourism. Both of these are natural-friendly and harmless to wild life.（如果能把两部分内容融合起来就更好了，这一点大家都需要努力）留学,考试,TOEFL,GRE,GMAT,IELTS,SAT,VISA,文书,签证,论坛,出国,申请,美国,英国,欧洲,加拿大,USA:uY{$cw
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!rF@L'eecorporation 这样的题是我的弱点啊，你说得真好，请教经验
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