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First of all, it can bring them a lot of knowledge like music, art, or drama. What a pity that I have no chance to study those subjects in my childhood. I really like those subjects, so I choose to study them in my spare time. But I have no formal education on those subjects, so it fairly hard for me to get a deep insight into those subjects. So it is lucky for these children if they have a chance to touch those types of subjects in a(an) early age, and they can develop their ability or broaden their knowledge.
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    The special gifts will bring people something else more than the presents themselves. For example, children in poor families aided by anonymous people and then finished their college education eventually, they learned to appreciate what they got and will work more hard to feedback to our society and be willing to help others who are in the familiar situation as they were. The meaning of the good and amplified effects is far more precious than the money funded to the children's education. People will remember and take those who send the gifts to them as speical friends. Give myself as an example, the stamp made our friendship to a higher level. So if you select a special present for your friend, you will be remembered as his or her special friend.   
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    In short, children learn to appreciate the beauty of the world by participating the courses of art, music and drama, their lives are more colorful than that of without those.（最后点下题是不是更好？估计着急了）
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感觉虽然小作文相对来说比较容易，可是不熟悉还是不行的,我们共同的缺点,无头苍蝇一样,大家都好好研究下,谢谢17号的修改,我口语主要还是听力的问题,我会努力的

其实平时的练习和考试还是有区别的~
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*O[9e&tE%E寄托家园On one hand, some gifts remind us of great events happened in our lives. Abirthday gift recalls happy time when we at different ages. An anniversary giftlooks back on every memorable event in the past year. When we graduate—nomatter we shall go further education or begin to work, we may receive gifts aswell. These gifts are full of bless and great joy.  One of my mostmemorable gifts is a Bobby toy. Dan and mom gave me the Bobby toy after I wonthe first prize on a rhythm gymnastic competition. I valued this gift notbecause of(去掉) it was a Bobby toywhich I yearned for a long time. I valued it because it embodied theirinspiration and encouragement to me. Also, every time I look at the Bobby, itevokes that glory time.
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Besides, a special gift can make me remember a person. For instance, I have apen from my teacher as a good praise for performing well in the semester. Ihave never used(use) it, and I put it away onmy desk. I was not a good student in the junior middle school, but after Irecognized the inportance(importance) of study,I study much harder. Then I made a obvious progress, my teacher told me that ifI was better than past, I would gain a lot besides a pen. Since then, I try mybest on everything, and every moment i see the pen, I will remember my teacherwho gave me a so useful suggestion. 这个例子不够精炼，这一段的核心应该是想起一个人，所以花在细节上的文字不要太多了。pb4~8sBfu7K/t&`q

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Nowadays, the competition in the society are becoming more and more firece(fierce), So people such as children, youth,or even adults, need to learn more things than even before. 这两个句子之间没有过度，显得很突然阿There is a debate whether children shouldlearn such subjects as art, music, and drama. In my view, I think child shouldstudy those subjects.
        B        _[|:Z"e:|D留学,考试,TOEFL,GRE,GMAT,IELTS,SAT,VISA,文书,签证,论坛,出国,申请,美国,英国,欧洲,加拿大,USAFirst of all, it can bring them (provide children)a lot of knowledge like music, art, or drama. What apity that I have no chance to study those subjects in my childhood. (感觉这句话有点太口语化了) I really like those subjects, So(so) I choose to study them in my spare time. But I have noformal education on those subjects, so it (is) fairly hard for me to get a deep insight intothose subjects. So(连续使用了3次) it is lucky forthese children if they have a chance to touch those types of subjects in aearly age, and they can develop their ability or broaden their knowledge. 这段有点没展开，太拘束了。
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首先道歉！严重破坏小组纪律了，没有按时交作业和改作业。前几天太忙了，基本没有时间学习 。1号和4号没时间不用改了，就当是惩罚我吧。呵呵。此外，delta的大作文我没有写，因为觉得和以前我们写过的185题库里的第125题很相似，所以我另外找了一道题写了。
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Usually, special gifts are a part of a special event. Theycan remind us of those special days such as holidays, anniversaries,friendship, family, wedding, inspiration and many more. What’s more, we cherishthose gifts because they present our happiness and past which are the sweetestmemory in our life. For example, a wedding president of delicate tableware takesus back to the happy wedding, and then we indulge ourselves in recollecting ourhelpmate’s tender gaze, best wishes from relatives and friends, bundles of beautifulroses, and palatable wedding cake. Also, a beautiful Christmas card made by ourfriends reminds us of the joyful days we shared together. And a memento from arespected colleague makes us remember the job we worked on successfullytogether.寄托家园3zZ}&R3hOr
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Moreover, 15-18 year-old teenagers shoulddevelop the ability of making decision, especially the important ones, bythemselves. Since most of them are going to attend college soon, the ability ofindependence is required. Making important decisions by themselves helps themto develop independence. Such experience, in turn, will improve the ability ofanalyzing and solving problems. However, if parents make important decisionsfor their children all the time, teenagers will become dependent. They feel afraid,cowardly or halting when they have to make decisions.
#sw*o%f"f[4U!V!{/DAlso, if teenagers make decisions bythemselves, they can choose something they interested in, without the inappropriatecontrol by parents. All too often we observe some parents tend to pursue theircherished but failed dream by forcing their children to develop in a prearrangeddirection. Ironically, when their children do not follow the instructions, thechildren will be regarded as disobedient. As a result, teenagers can seldomfind anything they truly interested in. They lack a drive force to pursue theirfuture.9_(p&L2R5hA
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In sum, 15-18 year-old teenagers shouldmake important decisions by themselves, for they are able to do this, and theyshould develop the ability of independence, they can also find interest infuture.
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In the lecture,the professor made several points about the goals of travel. The professorargues that earlier people travel for conquest and later people travel forpleasure or observing nature. However, the reading contends that people travelfor political or economic purposes. The professor’s lecture casts doubt on thereading by using a number of points that are contrast to the idea in thereading material.
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Another point that the professor used to cast doubt on the reading is peoplenowadays travel for pleasure or in order to observe and learn nature. Theprofessor claims that people travel a distant place as well as unusual culture.He gives an example of travel to Africa. Heillustrates that people travel to Africa forits traditional wildlife such as social customs, arts, crafts and localceremonies. Also, the professor points out that some people travel to someplaces where few people have gone in order to observe and learn nature. He usesthe example of travel to Africa again. Thesepeople go to Africa for goal of observingphotograph of wildlife but not kill it. However, the reading states peopletravel for political or economic purpose. The point is contradicted by the ideain the lecture.0}-L].u8C
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