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However, numerous problems would come with the building of a restaurant. The most obvious one is that the restaurant would have a large number of customers. All kinds of persons, maybe some criminals, are included. This may seriously weaken the safety condition for me and my family. What is more, even if crimes do not happen, the customers do will make noise and have significant negative effect to my life.寄托家园
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At first, It can give big  convinece to the people live nearby. As we all know, the steps of modern  life are more and more rapid. People save each minute to work, to earn and to rest.  After a hardworking day, a one hour or more cooking work exhaust people’s last energy and treasure time. If after off-duty, people  don’t go to kitchen ,directly go  to restaurant to order the favourate food, then just wait and talk. How wonderful it is!寄托家园V$u6A9XQ-_&y
Secondly,If a restaurant is built nearby, people will had another important  dinner room besides the one at home. The outside dinner room plays an unreplacable role .For example ,if many friends visited at the same time, and the dinner room cannot hold so many people, taking them to a restaurant is a good idea .Also,  if some visitor are not welcomed by household or children ,entertaining  them in restaurant is a good choice.A%F;Sm~
So, I welcome the restaurant being built in my neighborhood. I hope I can have dinner at the restaurant as soon as possible.