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What do you want most in a friend — someone who is intelligent, or someone who has a sense of humor, or someone who is reliable? Which one of these characteristics is most important to you? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your choice.

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Which characteristic is the most important of a friend? One hundred people may have more than one hundred answers, and each answer of this statement depends on each one’s own experience and life style. Since friendshipy plays a significant role in my life, among countless factors which influnce the choice, I choose reliability as the most indispensable one for the following reasons.
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3Dk `c,{h|留学|签证|TOEFL|GREFirstly, a reliable friend will scarcely cheat you or betray you, and he is worthwhile to get trusted. Two strangers meet each other, talk with eath other, get acquainted with each other and trust each other, then we could make a defination that they are friends. We may know or be fond in somebody because he or she is intelligent, has a sense of humor, but we will not call him or her our friend unless we find him or her is also faithful and trustworthy as well. Imagine that you make a friend with a certain one who is very clever and always makes you laugh, however, he never trust you and cheat you many times, nobody will believe that he could br your friend. 留学,考试,TOEFL,GRE,GMAT,IELTS,SAT,VISA,文书,签证,论坛,出国,申请,美国,英国,欧洲,加拿大,USAT"dL-q-PD1Ur

%nv5w gf2tynbbs.gter.netFurthermore, making friends with reliable people will enforce the friendshio effectively. For a trustworth one is not only worthwhile to make friend with, but you will also feel like being his friend. Since you could trust your friend almost in every aspect, you could talk about your problem with him and never worry that whether he would tell others or not, and you could also turn to him for help when you are in trouble without hesitation or scruple. Friendship between those friends and you, thereby, gets further development and finally becomes

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1~!w:|8GZYT,`E#ja寄托家园In conclusion, friends are really significant part in everyone’s life, and reliablity must be the most important quality in a friend, because a reliable friend makes us believe that friendship is reliable in our life. Not only should my friends be reliable to our friendship, but also I should too.
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描述一个你愿意说话的人,说什么,为什么。
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Well, the person now I eager to talk to is Michael Schumacher, who is the best fomula one driver and is also my idol. I respect and admire him as a really amazing, brilliant driver, but I don’t know why he chose to get retired last year, thus I want to ask why if I could have a time to chat with him. Though he has won the world champion for 7 times, however he wat beaten by Alonso, another young driver last year, I really want to know that why he chose to leave this race instead of fighting with Alonso and winning his champion title again this year
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Which characteristic is the most important of a friend? One hundred people may have more than one hundred answers, and each answer of this statement depends on each one’s own experience and life style.(到处用的大路货)Since friendshipyplays a significant role in my life, among countless factors which influnce the choice, I choose reliability as the most indispensable one for the following reasons.
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Firstly, a reliable friend will scarcely cheat you or betray you, and he is worthwhile to get trusted.
Two strangers meet each other, talk with eath other, get acquainted with each other and trust each other, then we could make a defination that they are friends(不错,属于我喜欢的句子). We may know or be fond in somebody because he or she is intelligent, has a sense of humor, but we will not call him or her our friend unless we find him or her is also faithful and trustworthy as well. Imagine that you make a friend with a certain one who is very clever and always makes you laugh, however, he never trust you and cheat you many times, nobody will believe that he could br your friend(好思路,赞一下). %\,L!B3@9`r zG;D
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Furthermore, making friends with reliable people will enforce the
friendshio effectively. For a trustworth one is not only worthwhile to make friend with, but you will also feel like being his friend. Since you could trust your friend almost in every aspect, you could talk about your problem with him and never worry that whether he would tell others or not, and you could also turn to him for help when you are in trouble without hesitation or scruple. Friendship between those friends and you, thereby, gets further development and finally becomes留学,考试,TOEFL,GRE,GMAT,IELTS,SAT,VISA,文书,签证,论坛,出国,申请,美国,英国,欧洲,加拿大,USA7st:{8}zbu
really invaluable friendship just in coincide with the old saying- a friend in need is a friend indeed.
(这一段局的好乱啊,我读起来,感觉思维很吃力。可能长句比较多,我仔细分析了,没什么问题。但是还是感觉没有上面一段扩展的好。)
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In conclusion, friends are really significant part in everyone’s life, and
reliablity must be the most important quality in a friend, because a reliable friend makes us believe that friendship is reliable in our life. Not only should my friends be reliable to our friendship, but also I should too.留学,考试,TOEFL,GRE,GMAT,IELTS,SAT,VISA,文书,签证,论坛,出国,申请,美国,英国,欧洲,加拿大,USAz8RE}+L)g&b0wu2T:j

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描述一个你愿意说话的人,说什么,为什么。
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那个为什么使问,你要说什么的为什么。
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