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标题: [求助] TWE134,第一次发文,请大家指教!9.15考
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发表于 2007-8-20 12:20  资料 短消息 
TWE134,第一次发文,请大家指教!9.15考

作文功底一直不好,之前考了AW,勉强得了个4.0,自己就以为TWE不会太费劲的,看来不是啊。恳请牛人帮忙看看。这是我限时后稍作修改的(主要是拼写,因为想拿出考试限时的水平吗,所以还有些地方看出不好但也没太做修改。如给大家带来不便或看着不舒服,请多见谅!)
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Children should not have to work or help with household tasks; their only responsibility should be to study.
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When I was in the junior or senior high school, my mom often told me:' you do not need to do anything, the only thing you should try your best is studying. This is a common phenomenon in modern society which pays too much attention to the certification. However, I do not hold that the children’s only responsibility is to study. They also need to learn self-dependence, practice handwork, exploit creativity, enjoy with family, etc. And, doing some household tasks can help these. A        _Lz-Y8A

4]ON B8ul O9i8X(oIt is no doubt that studying is children's main responsibility. Childhood is important stage for mankind to learn. The brain is in the best condition. Children should try their best to learn academic knowledge, because all of these is preparing for the future. Moreover, modern society put more and more emphasis on certification or degree. It means that people without a college degree may be hard to find a job. Academic background is the prerequisite of living and working in modern society.s0J/Mf2}}

??5kzBuu7?However, 'main' does not equal to 'only'. Children should also do some homework; of course, should not affect studying. There are many advantages for doing homework. First, children can learn the basic living skill or knowledge from doing housework. After all, children will leave their parents and live on themselves. For example, they can know how to make food by helping mother preparing for dinner. Once they learn it, they will not need to worry nothing to eat in the future. Z&r)V#d5p
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Second, doing some homework can practice children's creativity and handwork. Helping father with repairing house, children can learn many kinds of skills, such as carpentry, construction, etc.  In the repairing process, they may consider that ‘why it should be so arranged’ or ‘how can I make it better’. They may use their specific creativity and knowledge to try, to make their own best repairing. They can get practice during such process. In contrast, 'Bookworm' can name many children today just due to lack of handwork practice and creativity. bbs.gter.net0fb+H&M0iD
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In one word, children should also do some household tasks, though studying academic knowledge is their main responsibility. Children can learn many other important knowledge and skills while helping with homework.
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发表于 2007-8-20 20:05  资料 短消息 
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发表于 2007-8-21 22:23  资料 短消息 
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