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Some people think scientist contribute the society more,others believe other subjects contribute more such as language and business.What degree do you agree or disagree.
There is a long-running debate as to whether the social progess lie with science or with other subjects.
Some people believe that scientist motivate the modernization of mankind heavily while others maintain
that society has been booming since now due to the even-accelecating development of other principles such as business and linguistic. To my mind, the former view does make sence.
We can hardly lose the sight of the fact that every country prides itself on the scientific and technical advance and keeps abreast on sophisticated skillin the world.Undoubtedly,Science which creates wonders during the history of mankind, plays a vital role in stimulating the progress of human beings' civilization.For instance,since the first evporated machine had been invented,the sociaty ran into the industriated time where the efficiency of mannual work was improved extremely meanwhile the scale of production was enlarged much more than that before.In addtional,a deep awareness to the world has been further with the help of the scientific knowledge.Finally,the change of the life style and standard has taken place gradually.the variety of household electronic equipments makes the daily life much more convenient that the ancient people can not imagine.The average lifespan become much longer because of the first level medical facilitise that scitence brings about.
Nevertheless.I am far from advocating neglect of business and language,am I an enthusiast of scientism.To some extent,the increasing economy depends on the flourish business.Moveover the advance of science enable companies to gain huge profit which can invests the science research to spur the foot of science.
[ 本帖最后由 H-Kevin 于 2007-8-26 09:00 编辑 ]
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