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Teacher(这里最好用复数哦), illuminating of（去掉？）knowledge, plays an essential role in the process of students who crave for knowledge. Some people purpose that（你的用法又几特别） teachers should teach students how to judge right from wrong., those who oppose it argue that teachers should just teach students academic subjests.（上面这句最好不要照抄题目哦？） From my point of view, both opinions are valid but need balanced.To begin with, it goes without saying that students should be taught with academic knowledge, which is the necessity of their future. Subject（s？） including Math, physics, history, language, and so on has their（？） special purpose, which will conduce to students academic ability, laying（你这里用现在分词？这样我就理不清你的句子关系了） good foundation for further education and future career. Therefore, teacher should give priority to academic subjects in classes.Despite the significant role of the academic knowledge, the skill of how to tell the differences from right to wrong should not be neglected. It is no denying that we are living in a world of contrast（这句是什么意思，请教一下）, as the living standard improves, life abound in more and more unavoidable problems. The increasing trend of juvenile delinquency become（这里应该用单数，老外会觉得你这个错犯得很“严重”） the focus of the media, which arise big concern. Students, especially the youngster, have no basic concept about （of？）the differences between right and wrong, without the appropriate guides, they are too vulnerable to negative effect, namely the frequent violent plots on the TV screen, the sexual and pornographic description on the webpage ,（这里应用一个and连接，不过你后面还有一句the list，，，）tobacco advertisements on the street（？）, the list will go on and on. It is the responsibility for the teacher to teach some basic rules, and let them know the dangers and beware of them.To sum up, it is true that the teacher should emphasize the academic knowledge; it is also true that teacher should teach students to judge what is right and wrong. However, both of them are necessary responsibility of teacher, only with the combination of these two aspects, the students can be trained to a capable person（晕 ，最后还来一个单复数不对应）.
你的作文真的让我不好评价，，，
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