人们为什么要上大学，people attend college or university for many different reasons,for expamle,new experience, career preparation, increased knowledge,why do you think people attend college or university?
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First and foremost, people can obtain more knowledge which is necessary for their future career. Because of the rapid development of the society, much knowledge of subjects are also changing and advancing. For example, the technology such as computer science, communications technology are always developing, if a person with not up-to-date knowledge can't catch up with it, and will not be able to do the job well. So they should attend university to study the basic skills and new knowledge to become competent for the future job.)BAZ3B4zx5VSlC
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Besides, people with the university diploma would be more competitive when finding a job. In most cases, a higher degree means a higher salary, it is also means more opportunities to get promotions and advancements. In recent years, it is becoming more and more difficult for people to finding a job, and many companies will require high standards for their candidates, like could  speaking foreign languages and could operating computer proficiently.  Due to the intense competitive situations, many people have to choose to attend the university to complement themselves according to the requirement.
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Last but not least, the life in university is so great, so wonderful, maybe it is the best and the most memorable life experience for most people. The life in university can enlarge the knowledge, widen the horizon, and increase the skills of social communications. For instance, People could make many friends, attend some student associations, and choose some subjects they interested in to learn. They will have more freedom to enjoy the university life.
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j}2x'vFrom what has been discussed above, we can draw a conclusion that, attending universities benefits a lot for people who want to obtain more knowledge, job promotions, and new experience.
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[ 本帖最后由 violin75 于 2007-9-1 23:51 编辑 ]

其实我也刚开始准备，不太有发言权，不过我觉得好像有些语法的错误

有什么语法错误，请指出，没关系的~~

我不知道怎么像别人那么改，可能有点乱。
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我语法也不是特别好，你作参考吧，哈哈，还有，我觉得你的文章好像缺乏说服力，其实用‘演绎法’构思挺好的，这样就不会乱了

knowledge 用的比较多的是acquire和attain。。。