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标题: [主题活动] 响应豆豆号召,综合写作投票(附题下载,像真题)
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发表于 2007-10-21 15:27  资料 短消息 
回复 #1 红颜祸水 的帖子

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回复 #7 kangkang0125 的帖子

干凈利落!挺好的!
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我們XDF的老師就要求我們這樣寫的!加油!
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谢谢大家支持^_^




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Life is like a 2πr.

Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. We ask ourselves, Who am I to be brilliant, gorgeous, talented, fabulous? Actually, who are you not to be? We were born to make manifest the glory of God that is within us. It's not just in some of us; it's in everyone. And as we let our own light shine, we unconsciously give other people permission to do the same.
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发表于 2007-10-25 13:16  资料 短消息 
我也试着写一篇,字数太多,怎么办呀!汗死

The lecture is mainly discussing that working for four days a week is not a good strategy at all, which is drastically challenging what is stated in the reading passage.
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First of all, the professor states that such a policy would do harm to the company’s profits. Because the company should provide more training opportunities and medical insurance if they hire new employees. Furthermore, the heath-care fee is same no matter the current employers are working for four or five days per week. Moreover, new employees need more working space and computers to work. All of these mentioned above will definitely affect the company's profit. This point is totally contradicting with what is claimed in the reading that the shorten work time would increase the company’s benefit by having less error-prong workers.
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Secondly, the professor also points out that there would not be any additional jobs. Companies would possibly force the employees to work overtime in order to make up the lost in their rest days. The employees might be expected to create more products than usual, and they may feel more unpleasant due to the overwork. This wholly differs from what the reading states that this policy would help to decrease the unemployment rate.
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Finally, the professor mentions that the current employees may run a risk to lose jobs and finally can not pursue their dreamy lives. Because the employers would offer more jobs to the applicants who want to work for five days per week, and they are also glad to promote those kinds of workers. In the end, the four-day staff would probably lose good chances to advance their career. Hence, they would lose the ability to improve their qualities of lives. This point entirely contradicts what is provided in the reading about that this policy would help decrease the rate of unemployment and the employees could absolutely improve their lives.
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To sum up, the points offered by the listening part totally disagree with what are indicated by the reading, which make the reading unpersuasive as it stands.
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很不错
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我写的倒是没问题 就是延了二三分钟
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楼上的兄弟 二十分钟 是咋整出这长的文章的 佩服
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照着书打 也只是550+/-三十分钟
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先要经过苦训的试练。
流光所有汗水, 用尽所有力气。
别让身体停下,
把训练的目标定在永远达不到的地方。
但还是要达到。
你会感到疲惫,犹豫, 甚至沮丧。
但你不许放弃。
因为胜利不会是奇迹。
有一种天才, 只从坚定不移的信念中诞生。
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先要经过苦训的试练。
流光所有汗水, 用尽所有力气。
别让身体停下,
把训练的目标定在永远达不到的地方。
但还是要达到。
你会感到疲惫,犹豫, 甚至沮丧。
但你不许放弃。
因为胜利不会是奇迹。
有一种天才, 只从坚定不移的信念中诞生。
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怎么下载不了附件阿 马上要考试了好着急 好心人能不能给我邮箱发一份阿 bolalisi83@163.com寄托家园$MvA)z a
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我也下不了附件..不知道怎么了
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