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标题: [作文] 帮忙看看啊,大虾们!
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发表于 2008-3-29 11:11  资料 短消息 
帮忙看看啊,大虾们!

Different types of music can be heared almost everywhere and everytime. Every day when we go along the streets, we can hear lots of music. When we open TV, we may hear some songs. On the way to work or school, we may sing songs ourselves.
We need music because it plays a vital role in our daily life. First, music can relieve us when we are tired or in bad mood . When I am blue, I would listen to music to make myselfer more stronger to face the difficulties in life. Secondly, music is a way to express our emotions. Some people even creat songs themselves. Thirdly, music is a method to entertain ourselves. We can see many youngs and olds go out to sing songs in bars in weeekend.
Traditional music has existied a long time in a country and international music is popular in the world now. I don’t think traditional music is more important than international music. International music can be heard everywhere because it absorbs essence from many countries traditional music and is accepted by people from every country. Traditonal music can also be popular when it makes some innovations and be liked by most people in the world. Traditon music  is the base of  international music we are creating now. We need both these two kinds of music.

[ 本帖最后由 forbeck 于 2008-3-29 13:01 编辑 ]
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发表于 2008-3-29 11:15  资料 短消息 
When we open TV,你牛的,你把电视都打开了。。。。。。turn on the TV......




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发表于 2008-3-29 11:16  资料 短消息 
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很多用词,词性。。。。。。。。。。

感觉很中国口语化。。。。。




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