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As human, we all need to develop through different periods not only in our bodies but also in our minds. At the same time, it is clear that human should belong to special groups or organizations during different life period because they are social animals, and these groups or organization indeed play crucial roles in their maturity.

In the first place, during time of childhood, people like to accompany with our boys or girls. These children gather together to do their home works and play games. These are primitive form of groups or organizations of human, and it is effective in the well being progress of children because their parents have less time to educate and nourish them. Their parents undertake great pressures which coming from working, making money, communicating with other people and sustaining family. (这句话变成从句跟前面那句连在一起，我觉得会好一点) Thus, these specific collections of boys and girls make children happy and promote them growing up in good conditions.

Secondly, when people step into the period of adolescent, they are still not solitary. During this time, they mostly study in elementary or high schools. There are so many clubs, include student unions, English clubs, mountain-climbing associations and so on. Students share experiences with others, activate other students through personal action and create many miracles with their team members. Therefore, they make great progress through these clubs. Take English club for example, many students did not even know they should attend TOEFL and GRE tests until they are enrolled in this club. Furthermore, their abilities of English listening and speaking are improved through only a few months’ practice in this group.
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Finally, all people would get into the old age period. Old people retired from their jobs and they have ever made great contributions to their nation, however, they are no longer active in society. They are fond of playing cards with their old friends, moreover, chatting in old people's clubs. They (do) not have any fun at all living in this world if there are no these types of organizations or groups because their live are tiresome and tedious. They only can stay at home and few people like to communicate with them while there are no old people’s clubs. Therefore, they need organizations and groups in this life period and these clubs make them glad and longevity.

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In the first place, during time of childhood, people like to (inclined to)accompany with( our， delete) boys or girls. These children gather together to do their home works and play games. These are primitive form of groups or organizations of human, and it is effective in the well being progress of children because their parents have less time to educate and nourish them. Their parents undertake great pressures which coming from working, making money, communicating with other people and sustaining family. Thus, these specific collections(assemblies,collection是搜集的意思) of boys and girls make children happy and（ promote ？）them growing up in good conditions.
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Finally, all people would get into the old age period. Old people retired from their jobs and they have ever made great contributions to their nation, however, they are no longer active in society. (Old people, who have ever made great contributions to their nation, however, no longer active in society when they retired from their jobs) They are fond of playing cards with their old friends, moreover, chatting in old people's clubs. They not have(have not) any fun at all living in this world if there are no these types of organizations or groups because their live（lives） are tiresome and tedious. They only can stay at home and few people like to communicate with them while there are no old people’s clubs.(Without these types of clubs, they do not possess any fun at all living in this world and their lives would be tiresome and tedious, all they can do is to stay at hame and have no one to communicate) Therefore, they need organizations and groups in this life period and these clubs make them glad and longevity.
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