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发表于 2008-6-25 15:55 资料短消息

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Dancing plays an important role in a culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.寄托家园2hG!S c%Yr1?jrK
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Beside our main language, there are other more vivid approaches to expressing human affection. For instance sing, dancing, and drawing. Among those, I believe that dancing is the most beautiful language in the world and play an important role in a culture.h
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One reason we consider dancing vital to us is that it provide us with the opportunity to communicate with others. In my country, dancing parties are held at every significant event: wedding ceremony, welcoming conference, birthday parties and so on. Those social events cater for golden chance for individuals to make friends. After the dancing parties, one's circle of friends will largely grows. What is more, in some especially cases, they would offer you with some astonishing surprise. Taking my father and mother for instance, they fell in love with each other at a ceremony parties when they first encountered. People fascinated with dancing parties not only to make friends, but also to search for spouse.

On the other hand, dancing is full of association with a nation's tradition. Taking an exotic dance for example, which is performed by the man during certain festivals in Wodaade, the men in this ethnic group have to do a sort of competitive dance for seven days, wearing in women's costumes, doing lots of make-up and body paintings and tattoos, in order to be rewarded as the beauty. This extraordinary weird dancing is one of the crucial social events in this nomadic tribe. In addition, some country's dancing style can be the reflection of their history. If you have watched black people dancing, you can find that some of their gestures and body poses are related to their compression past time.bbs.gter.net
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What is more, dancing is one of the most excellent outlets to express our pent up energies: happiness, excitement, mental, and craze. Even watching others dancing can exert tremendous feeling in one's heart. Nowadays, the numbers of dancing bar increase sharply, because that individuals' stress grows rapidly with the fast social step. As a critical approach of releasing, dancing becomes dramatically essential in modern society..ls^:HB1C|s

Besides what we have discussed above, there are other advantages of dancing. For instance, it is a wonderful way to keep people's physical condition in a high level. In conclusion, dancing play a critical in a culture through improving civilians communication, representing nations convention, and offering a eminent way of relaxation.

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发表于 2008-6-25 21:21 资料短消息

Beside our main language, there are other more vivid approaches to expressing human affection. For instance sing (singing), dancing, and drawing. Among those, I believe that dancing is the most beautiful language in the world and play an important role in a culture.

One reason we consider dancing vital to us is that it provide (provides) us with the opportunity to communicate with others. In my country, dancing parties are held at every significant event: wedding ceremony, welcoming conference, birthday parties and so on. Those social events cater for golden chance for individuals to make friends. After the dancing parties, one's circle of friends will largely grows. What is more, in some especially cases, they would offer you with some astonishing surprise. Taking my father and mother for instance, they fell in love with each other at a ceremony parties when they first encountered. People fascinated with dancing parties not only to make friends, but also to search for spouse. (这个很有趣)
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On the other hand, dancing is full of association with a nation's tradition. Taking an exotic dance for example, which is performed by the man during certain festivals in Wodaade, the men in this ethnic group have to do a sort of competitive dance for seven days, wearing in women's costumes, doing lots of make-up and body paintings and tattoos, in order to be rewarded as the beauty. This extraordinary weird dancing is one of the crucial social events in this nomadic tribe. In addition, some country's dancing style (styles) can be the reflection of their history. If you have watched black people dancing, you can find that some of their gestures and body poses are related to their compression past time.
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What is more, dancing is one of the most excellent outlets to express our pent up energies: happiness, excitement, mental, and craze. Even watching others dancing can exert tremendous feeling in one's heart. Nowadays, the numbers of dancing bar increase sharply, because that individuals' stress grows rapidly with the fast social step. As a critical approach of releasing, dancing becomes dramatically essential in modern society.寄托家园:]PBA
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Besides what we have discussed above, there are other advantages of dancing. For instance, it is a wonderful way to keep people's physical condition in a high level. In conclusion, dancing play a critical (role) in a culture through improving civilians communication, representing nations convention, and offering a (an) eminent way of relaxation
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发表于 2008-6-25 21:35 资料短消息

Beside our main language, there are other more vivid approaches to expressing human affection. For instance sing, dancing, and drawing. Among those, I believe that dancing is the most beautiful language in the world and play an important role in a culture.

One reason we consider dancing vital to us is that it provides us with the opportunity to communicate with others. In my country, dancing parties are held at every significant event: wedding ceremony, welcoming conference, birthday parties and so on. Those social events cater for golden chance for individuals to make friends (改成Those social events provide individuals with golden chances to make friends; Cater to--,迎合什么). After the dancing parties, one's circle of friends will largely grows (would be enlarged). What is more, in some especially cases, they would offer you with some astonishing surprise (改成surprises or astonishments). Taking my father and mother for instance, they fell in love with each other at a ceremony parties when they first encountered (改成came across要好一些). People are fascinated with dancing parties not only to make friends, but also to search for spouse. 寄托家园^Nq7Fl7h'cH'g?

On the other hand, dancing is full of association with a nation's tradition (改成dancing is fully associated with a nation’s tradition如何). Taking an exotic dance for example, which is performed by the man during certain festivals in Wodaade（what？）, the men in this ethnic group have to do a sort of competitive dance for seven days, wearing in women's costumes, doing lots of make-up and body paintings and tattoos, in order to be rewarded as the beauty. This extraordinary weird dancing is one of the crucial social events in this nomadic tribe. V%wVwrL;jD
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In addition, some country's dancing style can be the reflection of (改成reflect简洁很多) their history. If you have watched black people dancing, you can find that some of their gestures and body poses are related to their compression past time (not so clear?).

What is more, dancing is one of the most excellent outlets to express our pent up energies: happiness, excitement, mental, and craze. Even watching others’ dancing can exert tremendous feeling in one's heart (原句表达不清楚Even just by watching others’ dancing, we can penetrate into one person’s heart and recognize apperceive his or her complex feeling). Nowadays, the numbers of dancing bars increase sharply, because that individuals' stress grows rapidly with the fast social step (改为associated with the quick pace of industrialization and urbanization比较顺). As a critical approach of releasing, dancing becomes dramatically essential in modern society.Besides what we have discussed above, there are other advantages of dancing. For instance, it is a wonderful way to keep people's physical condition in a high level (改成people in good physical conditions).

In conclusion, dancing play a critical in a culture through improving civilians communication, representing nations convention, and offering a eminent way of relaxation.

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