3 Do you agree or disagree? Dancing play a important role in a culture. Use specific reasons and example to support your opinion

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The history of human is so long that people not only work for their fundamental requirements such as eating, dressing, residence and traveling but also need entertainments because they have plentiful leisure time. Therefore, dancing act as a crucial role for people to kill their spare time and it gradually becomes a culture. Almost every nation has its own dance form, at the same time; they have crucial roles in spreading their national culture, teaching their offspring and enlarging the communication of people.留学,考试,TOEFL,GRE,GMAT,IELTS,SAT,VISA,文书,签证,论坛,出国,申请,美国,英国,欧洲,加拿大,USA[_GX1q
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First of all, they are so many dancing styles that stand for specific nations, we can remind of these nations when contact with their national dancing. One thing is that Kung fu is special type of dancing it is originated from China. Kung fu actors perform all over the world. Even some people didn't know China before they watch the Kung fu show. It represents our national culture because there are so many people prefer to strengthen their bodies and it presents the nice hope to keep fit, so as to have longevity. Moreover, they are some other dancing types, too. They are popular to our civilians and have been passing down for centuries. Nobody can say these dancing are not important to our nation and have no value at all in our culture.bbs.gter.netYs#W        jq!a9W
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When it comes to another cultural role of dancing, we will recall of teaching offspring. We can find that almost every elementary schools, high schools and even colleges pay much more attention to tutoring students dancing. Whey did they do it? We can get the answers through reckoning the effect of dancing. Dancing contain the spirit of having a good health and protecting our nation from invasions which are important parts of our national culture: peace is prerequisite of human's progress. Thus, dancing has affected so many students who will be our nation's future and hope.寄托家园~Akb&iC"}
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Last but not least, Culture is undividable segment of our lives. One thing could be called a culture mostly because it is essential to everyone's daily life and no one can lack of them. We can see that dancing exactly hold these characteristics so we can regard dancing as a culture. Furthermore, dancing can increase the possibility of communication between two unfamiliar people. For example, now people cost more and more time on working, therefore, they have less chance to communicate with others. The only time is their vacation that can supply them a chance to know other people. On the other hand, our civilians prefer to dancing rather than other activities. So dancing is a significant element in communication, in our culture, and in the development of our nation.bbs.gter.net3yfQ&I
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写了40分钟...?

请问您为啥都能写这长？我看你写的作文都是600+，这篇比较少，还是500-了...

是啊。 ，好难写啊。
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The history of human is so long that people not only work for their fundamental requirements such as eating, dressing, residence and traveling but also need entertainments because they have plentiful leisure time. Therefore, dancing act as a crucial role for people to kill their spare time and it gradually becomes a culture. Almost every nation has its own dance form, at the same time（属于前一句还是后一句）; they have crucial roles in spreading their national culture, teaching their offspring and enlarging the communication of people.
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[First of all, they (there) are so many dancing styles that stand for specific nations, we can remind of these nations when contact with their national dancing.One thing is that Kung fu is special type of dancing it is originated from China. Kung fu actors perform all over the world. Even some people didn't know China before they watch the Kung fu show. It represents our national culture because there are so many people prefer to strengthen their bodies and it presents the nice hope to keep fit, so as to have longevity. Moreover, they (there) are some other dancing types, too. They are popular to our civilians and have been passing down for centuries. Nobody can say these dancing are not important to our nation and have no value at all in our culture..i9l/C^#h
When it comes to another cultural role of dancing, we will recall of teaching offspring. We can find that almost every elementary schools, high schools and even colleges pay much more attention to tutoring students dancing. Whey did they do it? We can get the answers through reckoning the effect of dancing. Dancing contain the spirit of having a good health and protecting our nation from invasions (how?) which are important parts of our national culture: peace is prerequisite of human's progress. Thus, dancing has affected so many students who will be our nation's future and hope。寄托家园yU1qOAnm$I;TF'p

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b&_Y8l寄托家园 Last but not least, Culture is undividable segment of our lives. One thing could be called a culture mostly because it is essential to everyone's daily life and no one can (be) lack of them. We can see that dancing exactly hold these characteristics so we can regard dancing as a culture. Furthermore, dancing can increase the possibility of communication between two unfamiliar people. For example, now people cost more and more time on working, therefore, they have less chance to communicate with others. The only time is their vacation that can supply them a chance (chances) to know other people. On the other hand, our civilians prefer to dancing rather than other activities. So dancing is a significant element in communication, in our culture, and in the development of our nation。寄托家园#Y9C]3g?f0y"C7T

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Therefore, dancing is really active in the process of spreading national culture, cultivating offspring and enhancing communication of people and these three aspects are vital parts to evaluate the advancements of culture of our nation.  
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idea OK，就是例子怪怪的，比如功夫应该不算是舞蹈吧，应该是是体育运动吧，还有舞蹈如何protecting our nation from invasions？

The history of human (beings) is so long that people not only work for their fundamental requirements such as eating, dressing, residence and traveling but also need entertainments because they have plentiful leisure time(温饱才思淫欲吧) Therefore, dancing act as a crucial role for people to kill their spare time and it gradually becomes a culture. Almost every nation has its own dance form, at the same time; they have crucial roles in spreading their national culture, teaching their offspring and enlarging the communication (encouraging the communication) of people
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Last but not least,(最后但最不重要的？) Culture is undividable segment of our lives. One thing could be called a culture mostly because it is essential to everyone's daily life and no one can lack of them. We can see that dancing exactly hold these characteristics so we can regard dancing as a culture. Furthermore, dancing can increase the possibility of communication between two unfamiliar people. For example, now people cost more and more time on working, therefore, they have less chance to communicate with others. The only time is their vacation that can supply them a chance to know other people. On the other hand, our civilians prefer to dancing rather than other activities. So dancing is a significant element in communication, in our culture, and in the development of our nation. Therefore, dancing is really active in the process of spreading national culture, cultivating offspring and enhancing communication of people and these three aspects are vital parts to evaluate the advancements of culture of our nation.  
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