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发表于 2008-6-27 08:17  资料 短消息 
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72. You have been told that dormitory rooms at your university must be shared by two students. Would you rather have the university assign a student to share a room with you, or would you rather choose your own roommate? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
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n/b TW8W6Ge0RMUniversity is one of the most significant phrases in people's life, and thus, the individual who accompanied with a student is considered vital to him or her. Our university recently gives an announcement: all students have to share the dormitory rooms with another one. The administrators make a research, asking us to decide whether we prefer to have the university assign a student or share a room or choose our own roommate. Definitely, I will select the latter one, because I would never let the most essential person in my life chosen by others.
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Firstly, if I have been offered to select my own roommate, I can choose my most intimate friend, not strangers. I am not a talkative person, so if the university selects a new friend for me, I would have to waste a long time to get along with her. In the contrary, if one of my best friends lives with me, that difficulty will eliminate. Communicate with her would have no bars and I can hang out with her at the first day of school. I have not to spend time to know her, so that I can concentrate on my study more.
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c%V$|)vb$DDwF寄托家园Second, I am a positive person and most of my friends have the similar character. If the school chooses an optimistic roommate for me, I can not image what condition my life will be. Most of my friends are enthusiast and full of energy all day long, we have a lot in common and always study together. I do not know how to spend time with the depressed people. if my roommates is not happy everyday, I would not health in psychology. I prefer to share my dormitory with a positive person.bbs.gter.netN&_I/v$E7pe

3Ot[^4[*s*|u%lThirdly, If I choose one of my intimate friends as my roommate, I will fell more freedom. Best friends know each other well, so if I do something that is eccentric to the others, she would not mind. Such is human nature, everyone has a little dirty laundry, but this can only share with the most intimate friend. When I laugh at something silly, behavior like idiot, act like a craze person, she would consider it commonplace. In objection, if a stranger stays in dormitory, I can not doing those affairs.
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In consequence, choosing roommates by myself is better to my study life, psychology situation and I would have more freedom. Absolutely I will select my roommates by my own.
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发表于 2008-6-27 19:36  资料 短消息 
University life is one of the most significant phrases in people's life, and thus, the individual who accompanied with a student is considered vital to him or her. Our university recently gives an announcement: all students have to share the dormitory rooms with another one (others). The administrators make a research, asking us to decide whether we preferto have the university assign a student or share a room or choose our own roommate (share room with a student who assigned by university or choose our own roommates). Definitely, I will select the latter one, because I would never let the most essential person in my life chosen by others.
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Firstly, if I have been offered (allowed) to select my own roommate, I can (would or will.因为你后面还有strangers, you can choose strangers but you didn’t want ) choose my most intimate friend, not strangers. I am not a talkative person, so if the university selects a new friend for me, I would have to waste a long time to get along with her. In the contrary (On the contrary or in contrast), if one of my best friends lives with me, that difficulty will eliminate (be eliminated).Communicate with her would have no bars (Communicating with her would have no obstacle/difficulty) and I can hang out with her at the first day of school. I have not to spend time to know her, so that I can concentrate on my study more.|留学|签证|TOEFL|GREG}d|j+q,oZ8c

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Second, I am a positive person and most of my friends have the similar character. If the school chooses an optimistic (严重错误,意思表达反了,应改为pessimistic, unenthusiastic) roommate for me, I can not image (spell error, imagine ) what condition my life will be. Most of my friends are enthusiast (enthusiast) and full of energy all day long, we have a lot in common and always study together. I do not know how to spend time with the depressed people. If my roommate is not happy everyday, I would not health in psychology (她不高兴和你心理不健康关系不大,a roommate who always stay within depression will cast negative effect on my the psychological health). I prefer to share my dormitory with a positive person.bbs.gter.netv8b|-z@

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Thirdly, if I choose one of my intimate friends as my roommate, I will fell (feel) more freedom. Best friends know each other well, so if I do something that is eccentric to the others, she would not mind. Such is human nature, everyone has a little dirty laundry, but this can only share with the most intimate friend. When I laugh at something silly, behavior like idiot, act like a craze person, she would consider it commonplace. In objection (On the contrary or in contrast or but), if a stranger stays in dormitory, I can not doing those affairs.
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is better to my study life, psychology situation and I would have more freedom (is better to my study life, psychology situation and my freedom behaviors). Absolutely I will select my roommates by my own.
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发表于 2008-6-27 20:33  资料 短消息 
University is one of the most significant phrases in people's life, and thus, the individual who accompanied with a student is considered vital to him or her. Our university recently gives an announcement: all students have to share the dormitory rooms with another one. The administrators make a research, asking us to decide whether we prefer to have the university assign a student or share a room or choose our own roommate. Definitely, I will select the latter one, because I would never let the most essential person in my life chosen by others. I/j­bbs.gter.netCFsi4\!MgAS`
Firstly, if I have been offered (an opportunity/a chance)to select my own roommate, I can choose my most intimate friend, not strangers. I am not a talkative person, so if the university selects a new friend for me, I would have to waste a long time to get along with her. In the contrary, if one of my best friends lives with me, that difficulty will eliminate. Communicate (communicating) with her would have no bars and I can hang out with her at the first day of school. I have not to (do not have to) spend time to know her, so that I can concentrate on my study more.
}h$zJx5_寄托家园Second, I am a positive person and most of my friends have the similar character. If the school chooses an optimistic (根据上下文应该是悲观的吧,pessimistic) roommate for me, I can not image what condition my life will be. Most of my friends are enthusiast and full of energy all day long, we have a lot in common and always study together. I do not know how to spend time with the depressed people. if my roommates is not happy everyday, I would (be) not health (healthy) in psychology. I prefer to share my dormitory with a positive person.
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Thirdly, If I choose one of my intimate friends as my roommate, I will fell (feel) more freedom. Best friends know each other well, so if I do something that is eccentric to the others, she would not mind. Such is human nature, everyone has a little dirty laundry, but this can only share with the most intimate friend. When I laugh at something silly, behavior like (an) idiot, act like a craze(crazy) person, she would consider it commonplace. In objection, if a stranger stays in dormitory, I can not doing those affairs.
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发表于 2008-6-27 20:53  资料 短消息 
University is one of the most significant phrases in people's life, and thus, the individual who accompanied with a student is considered vital to him or her. Our university recently gives an announcement: all students have to share the dormitory rooms with another one. The administrators make a research, asking us to decide whether we prefer to have the university assign a student or share a room or choose our own roommate. Definitely, I will select the latter one, because I would never let the most essential person in my life chosen by others.bbs.gter.net[ t/n6[-U'Q

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Thirdly, If I choose one of my intimate friends as my roommate, I will fell more freedom. Best friends know each other well, so if I do something that is eccentric to the others, she would not mind. Such is human nature, everyone has a little dirty laundry, but this can only share with the most intimate friend. When I laugh at something silly, behavior like idiot, act like a craze person, she would consider it commonplace.这句好啊!学习学习! In objection, if a stranger stays in dormitory, I can not doing those affairs.寄托家园,D[4P3c{%U!y
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