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When you discuss with me about the problem that whether I prefer to live with a student who is assigned by university or a student who is chosen by myself, I would like to say I want to pick a student out as my roommate. According to my choice, there are so many advantages to me and I will list three issues as follow。

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First of all, one reason why I choose a student as my roommate is that I would find a roommate who is familiar to me so we can freely communicate with each other. There are so many things need to deal with in our daily life. These things conclude (include) living, study and emotion. And most of these things related to our roommate, our life will be full of difficult (difficulty) and our study will become worse and worse if we can not well communicate with our roommate. Take sleep routine for example, I am accustomed to stay up late to watch movies. That will be a big problem if my roommate is a person who inclines to sleep early, and we will have some conflictions. Furthermore, this will affect our lives and study.:B8m,L(S9hmU
Secondly, I deem common interest as a standard for my choosing (choice). Common interest will play important roles not only in the development of personal characteristics but also in the progress of our capacities. Having a similar interest is the basis of mutual encouragement. For instance, I frequently do some businesses using my spare money; however, the economical market is filled with risk. I will persist in my business when my roommate has a same hobby in it because he will activate me. The experience in my high school supports my opinion. My roommate in high school did some business with me and he encouraged me greatly. bbs.gter.netA[0g"ZF
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Thirdly, my roommate can test me whether is suitable for his roommate when I determine to live with him. (这句话有问题) Every student has the right to choose his own roommate. If university just arranges two students who did not acquaint with each other living together, many bad things will be happened and it is unfair to them. But in the process of choosing roommate, students gradually produce a sense of responsibility. This accountability contributes to the formation of mutual deference. Thus choosing roommate will affect my life attitude which will be useful for my future life。

In conclusion, it is so important to allow university students to choose their own roommate, and I appreciate this way. I can harvest much knowledge not only about life but also about major through living with roommate who I choose.

When--if 貌似 更通顺点~you discuss with me about the problem that whether I prefer to live with a student who is assigned by university or a student who is chosen by myself, I would like to say I want to pick a student out as my roommate. According to my choice, there are so many advantages to me and I will list three issues as follow.e0fHsG

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Secondly, I deem common interest as a standard for my choosing. Common interest will play important roles not only in the development of personal characteristics but also in the progress of our capacities. Having a similar interest is the basis of mutual encouragement. For instance, I frequently do some businesses using my spare money; however, the economical market is filled with risk. I will persist in my business when my roommate has a same hobby in it because he will activate me. 稍稍有点绝对，不过例子很特别哈！The experience in my high school supports my opinion. My roommate in high school did some business with me and he encouraged me greatly.

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Thirdly, my roommate can test me whether +he is suitable for his roommate when I determine to live with him. 这句没看懂，你是想说通过选室友来看我们是否合适？Every student has the right to choose his own roommate.这句有点偏题，题目是让你选择室友的，并没有说要特地安排给你。 If university just arranges two students who did not acquaint with each other living together, many bad things will be happened and it is unfair to them. But in the process of choosing roommate, students gradually produce a sense of responsibility. 我觉得这不成因果关系，通过选室友，并不能得到责任感吧？This accountability contributes to the formation of mutual deference. Thus choosing roommate will affect my life attitude which will be useful for my future life
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