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发表于 2008-6-27 21:54  资料 短消息 
第二次写作文,希望大家帮看看,谢谢.

72. You have been told that dormitory rooms at your university must be shared by two students. Would you rather have the university assign a student to share a room with you, or would you rather choose your own roommate? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
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If the university assign a roommate share a room with me, I will be so pleasure. Collage life time is not only leaning, and I think it is have so many advantages. More communication, And I also can know more information by communicate with my roommate. this period of time will be a very valuable time, when I in my collage life.bbs.gter.netacLB)`&y+U9e'm

)eQ-ZkE-@i寄托家园If I can choose the roommate, I prefer the guy who should be like clear, and very industrious, so that the room will not be a hell for us, and rich will be another reason, so he should not borrow my money, and when I face some economic problem, he could do me a favor.
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And I am not very worry about the roommate who choose by the university, I think the university should know the profile of me, and also they have the profile of the roommate, we should in the same major, so we get the issue we can talk about, and can help each other when study.
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mgR0gw~X0^X)rBut I think the university should let us know each other first, what ever I choose or the university assign, and we should have chance to change the roommate, some guy is so dirty and nobody can understand or compatible with him, and some people do not have the ability live without his/her mother, how should we endure with such people like this? Ridiculous.
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9Bl+~.as#@%lInclude all the things I talking above, I’d like living with some roommate, and I think Three people is better, you knows that, one and one is two, but three is a company. Joke, but a roommate can offer us more information, and we can practice how to communicate with people, in social, you are not alone, you must talk and work with different strange, and if you have a time live with some roommate, you will know how to make friends.
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发表于 2008-6-27 22:48  资料 短消息 
If the university assign a roommate share a room with me, I will be so pleasure. Collage life time is not only leaning, and I think it is have (change to: has) so many advantages. More communication, And I also can know more information by communicate with my roommate. this period of time will be a very valuable time, when I in my collage life (change to: college life).寄托家园gx.KK/w7?X

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If I can choose the roommate, I prefer the guy who should be like clear (clean), and very industrious, so that the room will not be a hell for us, and rich will be another reason, so he should not (would not) borrow my money, and when I face some economic problem, he could do me a favor.bbs.gter.net0F-\7?m-WR#Mi

#dg(g%txa3w|留学|签证|TOEFL|GREAnd I am not very
worry (worried) about the roommate who choose (chosen) by the university, I think the university should know the profile (information) of me, and also they have the profile of the roommate, we should in the same major, so we get (have) the issue that we can talk about, and can help each other when study.
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But I think the university should let us know each other first, what ever I choose or the university assign, and we should have chance to change the roommate, some guy is so dirty and nobody can understand or compatible with him, and some people do not have the ability live without his/her mother, how should we endure with such people like this? Ridiculous (感觉跑了,不在题上了。).
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Include (Including) all the things I talking (I have talked) above, I’d like living (like to live) with some roommates, and I think Three people is better, you knows that (as an old saying goes), one and one is two, but three is a company. Joke, but a roommate can offer us more information, and we can practice how to communicate with people, in social, you are not alone, you must talk and work with different strange, and if you have a time live with some roommate, you will know how to make friends.r7qKm~;q*r
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发表于 2008-6-30 00:30  资料 短消息 
谢谢您帮我修改,周末有些忙,没有跟上进度,现在乘着熬夜看球,赶上
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