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标题: [作文] 请大家我这篇作文能得几分,盼请指导。
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发表于 2008-8-21 23:02  资料 短消息 
请大家我这篇作文能得几分,盼请指导。

Topic:Differences between countries have become less and less evident, so we canenjoy the same films, brands and TV program.To what extent do you think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?

With society moving forward at anamazing rate in this age of change, differences between countries are beingnarrowed unprecedentedly and people enjoy the same films, TV shows and otherthings. Yet at the same time, controversy has arisen over whether thisphenomenon is a blessing or a curse. Some people contend that the advantagescreated prevail over its disadvantages. From my own perspective, I am in favorof their view, with certain qualifications.


Convincing arguments can be madethat people enjoying the same entertainment programs will bring numerousbenefits. To begin with, by enjoying the same programs, people all over theworld will be easier to communicate with each other. Specifically, variousunwanted or unexpected conflicts and misunderstandings would be avoided whenevery member of the world think in the same. Furthermore, it is manifest thatthe disparities in the fields of economy, culture and even the whole society willbe shortened greatly. For instance, new technology and products will be easilyused in developing countries, which is of great significance to the promotionof people’s living standards dwelling there. Last but not least, theinternational community is still under the threat of conflicts and wars, and agreat deal of research has proved that the difference of outlook of thought isthe root cause of the chaos, encouraging people to enjoy the same entertainmentprograms may therefore serve as a effective solution to the problems.


Admittedly, this new trend would alsocarry some potential drawbacks. The fundamental reason for this is that if allhumans in the world think everything in the same way, it would be extremedifficult to verify whether what we think or propose is right or not. Despite that,it is worth noting that we will have the ability to minimize our errors withthe help of advanced science and technology in the future.


To conclude, I would concede thatsome negative effects would come when all the people enjoy the sameentertainment programs and then think alike. However, it is unjustifiable to overlookthe boons brought about by this fashion. Overall, I am convinced that it isadvisable to encourage people to enjoy the same entertainment programs.

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发表于 2008-8-22 09:16  资料 短消息 
1 虽然program没问题,不过,这个考试毕竟是英国人主办的,用英式的写法会不会好点呢

楼主的作文确实很好,内容充实,逻辑清晰,而且用词很灵活~~~~真的没啥建议可以再提了




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发表于 2008-8-22 12:12  资料 短消息 
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确实应该把program 改为programme
谢谢你的指导!
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6.5---7




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