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标题: [作文] 本人小菜,写了篇T2,恳请好心人帮忙批改!
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发表于 2008-8-23 13:59  资料 短消息 
本人小菜,写了篇T2,恳请好心人帮忙批改!

题目:Detailed description of crimes on newspapers and TV has bad influence.Should this kind of information be restricted on media?
我的问题:对于这种题目,是类似与Do you agree or disagree?之类一边倒的论证,还是两边都要论述?

In modern times,an increasing number of reports,movies and TV series contained    detailed description of crimes are exposed to the public everyday.These evil behaviors
revealed on media could have negative effect not only on children and youngsters but also on society.So this category of information should be limited as discussed below.

To begin with,such detailed description might provide an opportunity for potential
criminals to research the method of breaking law and escaping pulishment ,especially
for children and youngsters.In interviews, a good deal of criminals claim that when they were in their childhood,they took the criminals in such reports role as models.As we know,the youths and children are too young to tell right from wrong,besides,they could easily get curious about the criminal behaviors and imitate them.In the long run,
the more children and youths might be influenced,in the end,the more crimes would occur.

Furthermore,the sense of insecurity might increase in society.Due to too much detailed criminal description,people get more worried about themselves and suspected about others surrounding,which may result in the insecurity or even the instablility of society.It is acceptable for media to indicate the danger of crimes to the public ,whereas,the way is to be blamed,because the reponsibility taken by media is not only to disclose the evil but also the to spare no effort to keep society in peace.Compared with such description,simple report is just enough to inform the danger of crimes.Don't you mistrust that people could become more polite and trustful to each other if they live in a friendly and harmonious environment without such description on media?

Based on the discussion above, we can make a conclusion that detailed description of crimes is ought to be restricted on media.
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发表于 2008-8-23 17:39  资料 短消息 
回复 #1 yaorui19870607 的帖子

写得不错啊,我就没这种水平啊。。。。
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发表于 2008-8-23 20:11  资料 短消息 
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hehe,我也是找了高手帮改一下的
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