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Furthermore, there are so many information and advertisement that people have difficult to identify the true or not. As we all know that many ADs expending the advantages and some even using feigned information to deceive consumers. There are some Ads employ people who never used the productions but said all kinds of advantages of the productions or talked about their benefic experiences. It is so easy to be deceived by those self-experiences. Furthermore the ADs not only offer untrue information to the public but also use psycology.bbs.gter.net{#l2V/xB
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Last but not the last, although people have know what they want to buy, they also could be fascinated by the advertisements. It is no denying that some advertisements could grasp what people think and satisfy their demands. For example, people could often see the automobiles' ADs combined with the beautiful girls. This is the phenomenon that ADs had known the consumers' minds and mislead the consumers-buying cars means making friends with beautiful girls.  
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The rapid development of mass media brings lots of information to the public. Also, the mass media had been changing people's life. Like the advertisements make a great influence on people. Some one said that advertisements are a waste of a company's money and time because consumers would not trust them. Others hold that they would believe what advertisements indicate and bought the productions. In my opinion, I support the second point.
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'MG5jw:q ?4QDTo the beginning with, it is evitable that advertisements are not all untrue and consumers can trust them. Some of advertisements tend to show the advantages to the public and show their qualities through the advanced technologies. These advertisements employing by investors have the responsibility to spread the useful and trustable production. Thus, these trustable advertisements definitely help the investors make profits. Here are the trustable advertisements, also contents the unauthentic ones which are so fascinating.(感觉太空洞了，details and examples呢，如果给出Trustable ads的例子来，能更好的支持本段论点，另外本段论点的表达有问题，“广告不是都是非真的且是消费者可信赖的，这是可避免的” 论点表述晦涩是大忌，别人上来一看就晕了，就没兴趣往下看了)
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Uh9HdZbbs.gter.netFurthermore, there are so many information and advertisement that people have difficult to identify the true or not. As we all know that many ADs expending (exaggerate) the advantages and some even using feigned information to deceive consumers. There are some Ads employ people who never used the productions but said all kinds of advantages of the productions or talked about their benefic experiences. It is so easy to be deceived by those self-experiences. Furthermore the ADs not only offer untrue information to the public but also use psycology. (依然缺乏details and examples, 说服力不够)
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感觉你的文章有离题的嫌疑 你通篇讲的是虚假广告的坏处 而题目是让你说明广告是不是浪费钱 即使虚假广告损害消费者权益 但能为公司吸引到更多的客户 能赚钱（比如说脑白金） 它就不是在浪费钱 题目的关键在广告的经济效益 而不是说广告对社会的好处和坏处

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To the beginning with, it is undeniable that advertisement enhance the sale of productions. ADs are surrounding people and pentrate their minds. Nowadys, it is difficult to few advertisements on the public places. For example, the huge picture depcitted a star holding a new mobliephone posts on the train station's entrance wall. the back seats on the public buses print therapeutic ADs. Also, it is hard to say that one watches TV programmes or ADs due to the countless ADs. So people will accept the ADs and buy their goods result from the gradually and continuous influences of ADs. As a result, ADs could stimult the public and increase the sale of production.  留学,考试,TOEFL,GRE,GMAT,IELTS,SAT,VISA,文书,签证,论坛,出国,申请,美国,英国,欧洲,加拿大,USAY3ild#R0{a0X:h
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Furthermore, most of people who seem had made decisions also tend to compare different productions. When those people find the other productions are better, they will change their minds. there are so many information and advertisements that people have difficult to identify the true or not. As we all know that many ADs exaggerate the advantages and some even using feigned information to deceive consumers. For example, one light bulb could last twice time than other light bulbs, but it cannot acheive. Also, the frish and prue milk comes from the illegal milkman, produced in a dirty envirement. There are many people around me being deceived by these ADs. Meanwhile, There are some Ads employ  the people who never used the productions but said all kinds of advantages of the productions or talked about their benefic experiences. There also exist many people being misleaded because of those feigned information.Thus, the Ads always affect people. 留学,考试,TOEFL,GRE,GMAT,IELTS,SAT,VISA,文书,签证,论坛,出国,申请,美国,英国,欧洲,加拿大,USA-E3sZ%z{

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