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t}V!}#u寄托家园In recent years, there is an increasingly common controversy concerning that whether advertisement (ads) is a waste of shareholder's money and employees' time for enterprise. It is possible that some people cast doubt on the effect of ads as consumer become more rational and often know what they want. However, arguing for the validity of the ads' function are those people who hold opinion that companies prepare and place ads in order to compete market share with their counterparties.[有问题 多了谓语] As far as I am concerned, corporations can acquire more benefits if they make ‘smart’ads due to ads' psychological impact on consumers' purchase behaviors.` wEo D&Y~Fw_(v^8Z
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Admittedly, it is undeniable that a growing number of people are aware of fact that ads can be misguided[misguide people], which greatly limits and weakens the function of ads. We may cite an appropriate example which is very persuasive. Recently, a product called Brain Age lost its market since its consumers highly doubt its effect on preventing aging as it advertised, and raise serious counter argument via the Internet. As more people read and trust in this new, they dare not to buy Brain Age, which directly leads to its sharply decline in sale. Therefore, investment on untrue ads eventually proves to be failure when people find the truth.AV(dVBwc
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Nevertheless, ads, whether trustable or not, have overwhelming psychological effect on people's consumption behaviors. According to a recent research report from the Psychology Department of Harvard University, people, especially female, are more likely to be affected by ads even though they know what and which to purchase. The result shows that consumers are more likely to buy what they are familiar with or just heardabout before. It also indicates that men, even seems to be more rational than women, are still prone to buy something they don’t need due to the pretty shop girls’ zealous promotion[不如香车美女的例子好]. As a result, consumers’ purchase preference can be changed by ads.
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In addition, most of the companies are forced, in some sense, to increase their ads budget for competing market share. After all, even people are clear with what they should buy, they need to decide which to buy. For example, last year the famous computer company DELL was defeated by its rival HP on the potable computer sale last year. When asked about the reasons, the CEO (Chief Executive Officer) attributed most of its success to its Advertising Department, since their sales experienced a drastical break through after they put a new ads program on Television.改一下主题句学|签证|TOEFL|GRE)\*|!g"sg:nUg
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From what has been discussed above, we may safely come to the conclusion that considerable though costs and time that ads require, they cannot compete with the benefits it brings about, when its guiding influence on consumers and function of competing market share are taken into account.From my point of view, advertising is still a kind of advisable and profitable investment rather than a waste of money, even though they may not be as effective as before.留学,考试,TOEFL,GRE,GMAT,IELTS,SAT,VISA,文书,签证,论坛,出国,申请,美国,英国,欧洲,加拿大,USA|P5`zV1Lj5E
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