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COMEON作文小组——梦想在望2008 9月27日作业

COMEON作文小组——梦想在望2008 927日作业(字数恐怕照标准差一些,请楼下战友狠狠地批阅!!)
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#_`kDd|留学|签证|TOEFL|GREThere is always a heated debate about higher education among people over a long period of time. Some people believe that only good students should receive higher education. Others hold the opinion that a college or university education should be open to all students. From my point of view, I agree with the former one. Universities should only allow good students into them.
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On one hand, good students have high grades in high schools and often possess excellent qualities. These students set their goals to enter universities from early time because they were aware of the significance of universities education for their future. They value the importance of higher education and are very willing to further their education. They have put enormous work into their education, and are interested in learning more. Poor students who did not try to achieve high good grades strikingly are not concerning about their education, and therefore, do not deserve to enter universities. Nevertheless, if they go back to high school and improve their grades, they should have a chance to go into universities as well.寄托家园j-V"[BlhD[}
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On the other hand, it would induce a number of problems if all students can access to university education. Imagine that, if universities did give all students, regardless of their grades, admission for higher education. Universities would quickly become saturated, and the quality of education would diminish because good students are not able to attain good education that they deserved. In addition, if all students have an access to go into universities, they would bring about a great financial burden of government. It would not beneficial for the sustainable development of universities education.
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In conclusion, I think that it is critical to conserve university education for those who really need it, such as good students. If poor students want to go into universities, they should go back into high school and improve their grades.  
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发表于 2008-9-28 10:51  资料 短消息 
There is always a heated debate about higher education among people over a long period of time. Some people believe that only good students should receive higher education. Others hold the opinion that a college or university education should be open to all students. From my point of view, I agree with the former one. Universities should only allow good students into them..E]4rV8nW`
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In conclusion, I think that it is critical to conserve university education for those who really need it, such as good students. If poor students want to go into universities, they should go back into high school and improve their grades.  字数够用不用太担心,是规定范围内的,写的挺好很清晰,结构也不错.改的不好请原谅!
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thanks for your modification!
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