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之后的写作小组由dolphin和heroic来接手,希望大家能一如既往多多支持~规则还是没有变哈~~


请注意,交作业和批改小组同学的作业基本靠自觉,版主能做的只是在有同学反映存在未完成作业或未批改他人作文的现象时进行提醒,希望大家都能坚持守信,屡犯会被取消参加小组活动的资格。

独立的题目主要是写作机经,但实际题目不限,综合写作为TPO。
现采取三天独立一天综合的模式

如何参加作文互改活动
Step 1 在论坛开一个自己的备考贴,以后的作业都贴在后面,开贴格式:“【独立写作】XXX作业贴”
Step 2 根据当天的作业写作文,修改,在word中查错,避免简单的拼写语法错误
Step 3 贴在自己的作文贴里,并在本帖回复,格式是:作业日期+交作业类型:独立+作文链接。不要直接在本帖中直接贴作业。此外,为加强交流互助,请大家贴作业之后将自己作文中的思路总结为两点或者三点,随链接一并补充在本帖占座楼中。
Step 4 分组,分组信息在三楼
Step 5 分组后,修改与自己同组所有同学的作业,要求在第二天分组之前改完

如何占座以及什么是占座
有能力交作业,但无法在deadline(分组)之前交的人,在本帖回复,以示占座,基本享受和交作业者同等待遇。
占座者需在第二天中午12点之前交上作业,否则视为无效占座。
占座步骤
Step 1  分组前在本帖回复,表示占座,内容是:我要占座+作业日期+作业类型:独立
Step 2  23:00分组后,修改同组同学的作业(不管最后是否交作业,都要改同组同学的作业!)
Step 3  贴上自己的作业,编辑修改自己的占座贴,把占座改为作业地址,并通知同组同学,不要重复回复!
发现不及时改作业的同学,做停止分组处理,直到修改完毕,再能享受分组,希望大家能够尊重版友的劳动,互相监督!

考虑到大家的精力有限,按照交作业的顺序三人一组,遵循“三人行,必有我师”原则。鼓励大家多看同学的作文。如果大家备考时间较紧张,希望二人一组,请在每天占位都标明~楼主会尽量帮你们安排。

links:
IBT作文漫漫谈
托福综合写作误区解读+TPO22实例写作
新托福独立写作部分误区解读(范例分析版)
对新托福独立作文审题的一些想法
综合写作Q&A(考了三次30分的经验)
综合写作之逻辑

沙发:每天作文题目
板凳:每天分组

注:再次提醒大家在附上作业链接时补充上思路总结,有助于版友们理解题目和开拓思路。

写作互改小组Q&A

发现很多同学并没有耐性看完前面的说明,我就先写一个常见问题和回答的总结。

Q1 独立和综合都要写吗?
A1 是的,目前的模式是写三天独立作文之后写一天综合作文,综合作文题目来自TPO,独立作文题目来自机经

Q2 分组后三人小组,除了我之外其余两位同学的作文都要改吗?可以A→B,B→C,C→A吗?
A2 是的,为了尽可能多的收获,参加活动的同学如果被分在了三人组,需要修改其余两位同学的作文;
     不可以,但是可以申请分在两人组。

Q3 如何进行占座和交作业?
A3 请仔仔细细从step1看到step5,注意自己开贴、不要在本帖直接贴作文、直接在占座楼编辑链接、不要重复回复

Q4 deadline?
A4 交作业是第二天中午12:00,修改小组同学的作文是在第二天分组前

Q5 为什么小组成员没有改我的作文?
A5 如果是刚来的同学,没有收到有人回复给你改好的作文的通知的话,请到你的作文贴去看看,右上角有“接收回复通知”的话请点击,可能是同学回复了但是你没有设置通知。
     如果不是出于以上情况,确实小组成员没有回复,请跟我站内联系。

Q6 不及时完成作业、批改他人作业怎么处理?
A6 提醒三次,超过三次被剥夺参与作文互改小组的资格,请各位慎重占座。

Q7 规则太乱没看懂各种deadline怎么办?
A7 总之不管是直接交作业还是占座,都得在晚10点前出现在这个帖子里,我才能认定为要参加当天活动并进行分组。
     改作业是第二天晚10点前改完。。
   
     DAY1 22:00前  直接交作业or先占座
              22:00     分组
     DAY2 12:00     DAY1的作业deadline
              22:00前  提交给同组同学批改的作文
                           直接交DAY2的作业or先占座  


Q8 一参加就每天都必须交作业吗?
A8 不,每天要参加才来占座,不参加也不用请假
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作文题目
感谢大家的支持和理解,版主回来啦,写作小组今天起继续~2015.7.17

写给口语写作小组的组员们~感谢,高质量互评的建议,以及点评铺福利

7.29
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Some prefer buy new technological devices; others having them when they are well-adopted. which do you prefer?

7.26
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Improving schools is the most important factor for the successful development of a country.

7.24
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Parents should set strict rules to their children if they want them succeed in the future

7.22
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents should let children make and learn from their own mistakes.

7.21
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People can take care of their family members in big cities better than in the countryside. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

7.18
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students could receive a better, more efficient education if they spend 11 months a year studying.

7.17
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? We should state our honest opinions even though other people may disagree with them.

6.29
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Patience is usually not a good strategy. We should take action now rather than later.

6.28
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? We should state our honest opinions even though other people may disagree with them.

6.27
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by the society in the past than they are now.

6.26
TPO 19 综合写作

6.25
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the busy and crowded world today, we should not expect people to be polite to each other.

6.24
In times of an economic crisis, in which area should the government reduce its spending? 1. Education 2. Health Care 3.support for the unemployed.

6.23
Some students prefer to have their final grades determined by numerous small assignments, whereas others prefer to have their final grades determined by only a few large assignments. Which do you prefer and why?

6.22
TPO 20 综合写作

6.21
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past young people depended on their parents for making decisions. Today, young people are better able to make decisions on their own.

6.20
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To truly enjoy a vacation(holiday), people should leave their mobile phones at home.

6.19
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The more money people have, the more they should give away to charity.

6.18
TPO 21 综合写作

6.17
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to attract good students, a university should spend a lot of money funding social activities.

6.16
Some people prefer to buy technological devices as soon as they are available to the public. Others people prefer to wait until many people have used them. Which do you prefer?

6.15
Do you agree or disagree with the statement: When people spend a lot of time watching sports on televisionor following their favorite team, it has negative effects on their lives.

6.14
TPO 22 综合写作

6.13
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.

6.12
Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

6.11
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important goal of education is to teach people how to educate themselves.

6.10
TPO 23 综合写作

6.9
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important things people learn are from their families.

6.8
In times of an economic crisis, in which area should the government reduce its spending?
1. Education 2. Health Care 3.support for the unemployed.

6.5
Agree or disagree: People should state their honest opinions even though they know others will disagree with their views.

6.4
TPO 24 综合写作

6.3
综合:TPO25
独立:Do you agree or disagree with the statement: When people spend a lot of time watching sports on televisionor following their favorite team, it has negative effects on their lives.

6.2
综合:TPO26
独立:Some people say that we should use clean energy to protect the environment, but others say that we should use traditional energy sources such as coal and oil because they are less expensive. What is your opinion?

5.31
综合:TPO27
独立:Although a lot of people know the environmental situation(e.g. global warming), the present situation is unlikely to change in the future.

5.29
综合:TPO 28
独立:For successful development of a country, should a government focus its budget more on very young children education rather on universities?

5.28
TPO 29综合写作
5.27
Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

5.26
If your teacher says something incorrect in a class, what will you do? 1. Interrupt your teacher right away 2. Keep silent 3. Correct your teacher after class

5.25
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The food we eat today is much healthier than in the past.

5.24
昨晚忘记出题目了 今天大家就休息一天吧
5.23
TPO 30 综合写作
5.22
In times of an economic crisis, in which area should the government reduce its spending? 1. Education 2. Health Care 3.support for the unemployed.
5.21
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?  The rules that the whole society today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.

5.20
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The government is not doing enough to educate people about the importance of good nutrition and healthy eating.
5.19
TPO 31综合写作
5.18
As the leader of a city, what would you do to ensure the prosperity and success of the city.
A. creating job opportunities for the unemployed;
B. lowering food price;
C. providing affordable housing.
5.17
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People can solve important problems by themselves or with the help from their family members so there’s no need for the government to help them.
5.16
If your teacher says something incorrect in a class, what will you do? 1. Interrupt your teacher right away 2. Keep silent 3. Correct your teacher after class
5.15
TPO 32 综合写作

5.14
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It's better to complete a project and then start another one than to do several things at the same time.
5.13
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Most business people are only motivated by the desire of money.

5.12
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People can solve important problems by themselves or with the help from their family members so there’s no need for the government to help them.

5.11
TPO 33 综合写作

5.10
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?  Movies and televisions have more negative effects than positive effects on young people's behavior.

5.9
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? When working on a project, it's better for classmates or colleagues to communicate face to face than sending mails.
5.8
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In order to succeed,you should be more like others than be different from everyone else.

5.7
TPO 34 综合写作
5.6
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The government is not doing enough to educate people about the importance of good nutrition and healthy eating.

5.5
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to attract good students, a university should spend a lot of money funding social activities.

5.4
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for the government to spend money on new buildings than to preserve historic or traditional buildings and homes.

5.3
TPO 15 综合写作

5.2
Some parents do not agree with the way teachers are teaching their children. Do you think that parents should express their disapproval to the teacher?

5.1
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people today are less dependent on their parents than young people in the past.

4.30
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Patience is usually not a good strategy. We should take action now rather than later.

4.29
TPO 16 综合写作

4.28
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Improving schools is the most important factor for the successful development of a country.

4.27
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most business people are only motivated by the desire of money.

4.26
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Society benefits more from works of great artist than from political leaders.

4.25
TPO 17 综合写作

4.24
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students should not take part-time jobs while they are studying in the university.

4.23
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure and successful future.

4.22
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People care more about public recognition than about money. Even if no money is given, public recognition can still make people work harder.

4.21
TPO 综合写作 18

4.20
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The government should spend money help more people access the Internet instead of improving public transportation.

4.19
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? An effective leader should try to make others feel that they are part of the decision making process.

4.18
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To achieve successful development of a country, a government should spend more money on young children’s education rather than on universities.

4.17
TPO 综合写作 19

4.16
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to attract good students, a university should spend a lot of money funding social activities.

4.15
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important for governments to protect wild animals and wilderness areas for the future generations.

4.14
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is as important for older people to study or learn new things as it is for younger people.

4.13
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The more money people have, the more they should give away to charity.

4.12
TPO 20 综合写作

4.11
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for the government to spend money on new buildings than to preserve historic or traditional buildings and homes.

4.10
If your teacher says something incorrect in a class, what will you do? 1. Interrupt your teacher right away 2. Keep silent 3. Correct your teacher after class.

4.9
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by the society in the past than they are now.

4.8
TPO 21 综合写作

4.7
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the busy and crowded world today, we should not expect people to be polite to each other.

4.6
Some students prefer to have their final grades determined by numerous small assignments, whereas others prefer to have their final grades determined by only a few large assignments. Which do you prefer and why?

4.5
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? We should state our honest opinions even though other people may disagree with them.

4.4
TPO 22综合写作

4.2
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Your job has more effect on your happiness than your living environment.

4.1
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It's better to complete a project and then start another one than to do several things at the same time.

3.31
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teaching is harder than it was in the past.

3.30
TPO 23 综合写作

3.29
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to attract good students, a university should spend a lot of money funding social activities.

3.28
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The more money people have, the more they should give away to charity.

3.27
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important things people learn are from their families.

3.26
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Most business people are only motivated by the desire of money.

3.25
TPO 24 综合写作

3.24
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important goal of education is to teach people how to educate themselves.

3.23
In times of an economic crisis, in which area should the government reduce its spending? 1. Education 2. Health Care 3.support for the unemployed.

3.22
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Although science and technology will Continue to improve,the most significant for the quality of peoples live have already taken place.
3.21
TPO 25综合写作

3.20
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People can solve important problems by themselves or with the help from their family members so there’s no need for the government to help them.

3.19
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The food we eat today is much healthier than in the past.

3.18
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Twenty years from now on, people will spend less time cooking or preparing food.

3.17
TPO 26综合写作
3.16
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People now can better protect the environment than they could in the past.
3.15
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?  All University students should take basic science courses, regardless of their fields of study.
3.13
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?  The most important characteristics for a politician or leader is good communication ability.
3.12
TPO 27 综合写作
3.11
Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

3.10
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? When working on a project, it's better for classmates or colleagues to communicate face to face than sending mails.

3.9
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?  The rules that the whole society today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.

3.8
TPO 28 综合写作
3.7
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?  Movies and televisions have more negative effects than positive effects on young people's behavior.

3.6
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to reduce air pollution is for the government to raise the cost of fuel (petrol).

3.5
As the leader of a city, what would you do to ensure the prosperity and success of the city.
A. creating job opportunities for the unemployed;
B. lowering food price;
C. providing affordable housing.

3.4
TPO 29 综合写作

3.3
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to succeed in doing a new job, the ability to adapt oneself to the new environment is more important than the excellent knowledge of this job.

3.2
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by the society in the past than they are now.

3.1
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In order to succeed,you should be more like others than be different from everyone else.

2.28
TPO 30 综合写作

2.27
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important things people learn are from their families.

2.26
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to attract good students, a university should spend a lot of money funding social activities.

2.25
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by the society in the past than they are now.

2.24
TPO 31 综合写作

2.23
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the busy and crowded world today, we should not expect people to be polite to each other.

2.22
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure and successful future.

2.21
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for the government to spend money on new buildings than to preserve historic or traditional buildings and homes.

2.20
TPO 32 综合写作

2.19
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People can solve important problems by themselves or with the help from their family members so there’s no need for the government to help them.

2.18
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for the government to spend money on improving Internet access than on public transportation.

2.17
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Improving schools is the most important factor for the successful development of a country.

2.16
TPO 33 综合写作

2.15
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People care more about public recognition than about money. Even if no money is given, public recognition can still make people work harder.

2.14
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To achieve successful development of a country, a government should spend more money on young children’s education rather than on universities.

2.13
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? We should state our honest opinions even though other people may disagree with them.

2.12
TPO34 综合写作

2.11
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Workers would be much happier if they are doing different types of tasks during their workday than doing the same task.

2.10
If your teacher says something incorrect in a class, what will you do? 1. Interrupt your teacher right away 2. Keep silent 3. Correct your teacher after class

2.9
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past young people depended on their parents for making decisions. Today, young people are better able to make decisions on their own.

2.8
TPO1 综合写作

2.7
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The government is not doing enough to educate people about the importance of good nutrition and healthy eating.

2.6
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Schools should use computers as a tool of education for children aged 4 to 7.




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因为版主个人原因,以后分组时间改为22:00 请大家在此之前占座~~谢谢

7.24
cystill weibofx7557

7.22
墨哈  flyingdanxing  
weibofx7557  mistyrain84

7.21
誓死最后一站! cystill  flyingdanxing  
Yukiko_冰激凌公主 weibofx7557 墨哈

6.29
err0716 leelili azure922


6.28
天天天蓝zl

6.27
墨哈 月光狗 mistyrain84

6.26
rainbow711

6.25
墨哈 xiaohuochai886 cmjabc123
月光狗 chdliu

6.24
coldsaber qiaoyi0181 xiaohuochai886
hudiandian chdliu

6.23
zsmsophie qiaoyi0181
墨哈 cmjabc123 leelili
mistyrain84 chdliu
xiaohuochai886 hudiandian

6.22
chdliu hudiandian
rainbow711 ppppp123
月光狗 qiaoyi0181

6.21
ppppp123 mayonion qiaoyi0181
WTONG mistyrain84 月光狗
xiaohuochai886 leelili

6.20
mayonion 墨哈 leelili
zsmsophie WTONG rainbow711
qiaoyi0181 xiaohuochai886 月光狗
mistyrain84 warpigeon

6.19
zgyyxyliupeng ppppp123 墨哈
mayonion mistyrain84 rainbow711
cmjabc123 zsmsophie xiaohuochai886
qiaoyi0181 WTONG

6.18
qiaoyi0181 hudiandian zsmsophie
cmjabc123 warpigeon
月光狗 rainbow711

6.17
墨哈 mayonion rainbow711
zsmsophie hudiandian

6.16
Zsmsophie qiaoyi0181 FergusShi
xiaohuochai886 lonesiren cmjabc123
rainbow711 warpigeon
月光狗 hudiandian

6.15
mayonion xiaohuochai886  
lonesiren  FergusShi

6.14
qiaoyi0181  zsmsophie
月光狗 hudiandian

6.13
qiaoyi0181  zsmsophie mistyrain84  
warpigeon  xiaohuochai886  
FergusShi hudiandian

6.12
mistyrain84  cmjabc123 zsmsophie
warpigeon  xiaohuochai886  mayonion  
SYSU-Mindy  hudiandian 再享青春
qiaoyi0181 lilyxuwen

6.11
donini  mistyrain84  KIELE  
xiaohuochai886  Wastelife  warpigeon  
walking_silvia   yuzh163  cmjabc12
hudiandian  qiaoyi0181  lilyxuwen

6.10
lilyxuwen zgyyxyliupeng cmjabc123
qiaoyi0181 warpigeon walking_silvia
月光狗 hudiandian

6.9
Lilyxuwen 月光狗 qiaoyi0181
prince1923 warpigeon WTONG
walking_silvia cmjabc123 StrayCats

6.8
cmjabc123 walking_silvia
Wastelife warpigeon

6.5(去演唱会了没有电脑分组不好意思啊。。不要打我啊)
walking_silvia  mistyrain84  zgyyxyliupeng  
zsmsophie  月光狗  Wastelife  
yuzh163   warpigeon  WTONG  
cmjabc123  leelili  
StrayCats  qiaoyi0181

6.4
Zsmsophie zgyyxyliupeng Wastelife
hyhpsp yuzh163 warpigeon
cmjabc123 StrayCats

6.3
EVA_yrj qiaoyi0181 cmjabc123
yuzh163 walking_silvia Wastelife
月光狗 warpigeon

6.2
独立:warpigeon  qiaoyi0181
全:lilyxuwen  yuzh163

5.30
qiaoyi0181  yuzh163  
zsmsophie  leelili

5.28
cccwwwlll1 lilyxuwen
fengxianmin  loserjack
qiaoyi0181  zsmsophie

5.27
zsmsophie qiaoyi0181 cccwwwlll1
loserjack liliudodo
yuzh163 我爱寄托爱我
5.26
zsmsophie qiaoyi0181
loserjack fengxianmin
yuzh163 lilyxuwen 我爱寄托爱我

5.25
qiaoyi0181 lilyxuwen
loserjack KIELE
zsmsophie oyashiroshama yuzh163
cccwwwlll1 我爱寄托爱我
5.23
qiaoyi0181 lilyxuwen
KIELE 我爱寄托爱我
oyashiroshama loserjack
5.22
qiaoyi0181 KIELE
loserjack oyashiroshama
leelili lilyxuwen
5.21
zsmsophie qiaoyi0181 liliudodo
loserjack lilyxuwen
yuzh163 我爱寄托爱我
5.20
兔纸酱 lilyxuwen loserjack
5.19
qiaoyi0181 loserjack zsmsophie
兔纸酱 lilyxuwen
5.18
zsmsophie loserjack 兔纸酱
yuzh163 liliudodo
5.17
liliudodo Cathy_Cate loserjack
qiaoyi0181 别贝尔
zsmsophie 兔纸酱
5.16
mayonion zsmsophie Cathy_Cate
5.15
lilyxuwen Cathy_Cate
5.14
qiaoyi0181 Cathy_Cate
mayonion liliudodo
5.13
mayonion liliudodo Cathy_Cate
1112223 lilyxuwen 我爱寄托爱我
5.12
qiaoyi0181 liliudodo Cathy_Cate
SYSU-Mindy Chansom
我爱寄托爱我  别贝尔
5.11
lilyxuwen Cathy_Cate
SYSU-Mindy lilyeulogistic
5.10
我爱寄托爱我 妖小丶柒
liliudodo lvxinshanghai
5.9
1112223 zsmsophie SYSU-Mindy
我爱寄托爱我 syh6320 妖小丶柒
liliudodo Cathy_Cate
5.8
1112223 liliudodo zsmsophie
w562956526 Cathy_Cate 我爱寄托爱我

5.7
Cathy_Cate w562956526 EVA_yrj
我爱寄托爱我 1112223
5.6
兔纸酱 mayonion w562956526
EVA_yrj liliudodo zsmsophie
Cathy_Cate 我爱寄托爱我 EVA_yrj
5.5
zealgt mayonion liliudodo
WTONG Cathy_Cate 15568697
w562956526 听_悦
我爱寄托爱我 loisloislois

5.4
zealgt EVA_yrj w562956526
WTONG 15568697 mayonion
听_悦 liliudodo 我爱寄托爱我
5.3
zealgt WTONG Cathy_Cate
lilyxuwen Chansom
我爱寄托爱我 听_悦
5.2
w562956526 WTONG 听_悦
zealgt 15568697
Cathy_Cate 我爱寄托爱我
5.1
听_悦 liliudodo w562956526
zealgt 15568697 兔纸酱
liliudodo zealgt 我爱寄托爱我
4.30
15568697 liliudodo w562956526
我爱寄托爱我 Cathy_Cate
4.29
w562956526 15568697
lilyxuwen liliudodo

4.28
兔纸酱 Avelite 15568697
w562956526 mrt0917

4.27
兔纸酱 Chansom zealgt

4.26
15568697 zealgt

4.25
听_悦 15568697 Chansom
孙小懒SSarah lilyxuwen

4.24
EVA_yrj zealgt lilyxuwen

4.23
mrt0917 leelili
lilyxuwen 15568697

4.22
15568697 Narcissus-art
mrt0917 lilyxuwen

4.21
lilyxuwen leelili
Thranduil sly1061101

4.20
sbyz 15568697
mrt0917 leelili
lilyxuwen 机智的酒窝

4.19
孙小懒SSarah Thranduil

4.17
mrt0917 听_悦

4.16
EVA_yrj dedemiao 橙子CassieLee

4.15
EVA_yrj   橙子CassieLee  6yylxd

4.14
mrt0917 6yylxd 孙小懒SSarah

4.13
leelili EVA_yrj 听_悦

4.12
Leelili dedemiao
孙小懒SSarah
EVA_yrj Thranduil

4.11
孙小懒SSarah mrt0917

4.10
mrt0917 Thranduil 孙小懒SSarah

4.9
Thranduil 1112223
mrt0917 fndu 毛毛晔

4.8
1112223 fndu 6yylxd
前路漫漫ing Thranduil

4.7
YoungDan 1112223 听_悦

4.6
6yylxd 1112223
前路漫漫ing YoungDan

4.5
Fndu 1112223 前路漫漫ing
听_悦 益达哒哒哒

4.4
前路漫漫ing 6yylxd 益达哒哒哒

4.3


4.2
Youngdan jolin-zhong 11122233
听_悦 前路漫漫ing 益达哒哒哒
4.1
YoungDan 前路漫漫ing
3.31
YoungDan 1112223 Jolin-zhong
3.30
YoungDan 听_悦 babyfatat
3.29
跳跳猫 fatsparrow1983
babyfatat mrt0917

3.28
前路漫漫ing  Jolin-zhong   babyfatat   
YoungDan   跳跳猫

3.27
前路漫漫ing YoungDan

3.26
前路漫漫ing bravoila sue12399

3.25
前路漫漫ing   YoungDan   tinane@qq.com   
Jolin-zhong   bravoila

3.24
YoungDan bravoila
sue12399 Jolin-zhong

3.23
Bravoila YoungDan sue12399
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