Another thing which is also important, i.e., rewriting long and clumsy statements of experience. This is a restricted material, so I re-type here.
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Choose “action” words to rewrite the following descriptions in a brief concise style. ("action" verbs can be found in the 1st attachment)
1. I was put in charge of a direct mail campaign and sent a lot of letters to all the company's customers.
2. Duties included the management of the club's annual budget, which I increased by starting a series of fund-raising activities.
After rewriting:
1. a. Supervised direct mail campaign to 3,000 customers.
b. Organized and implemented direct mail campaign to 3,000 customers.
c. Launched direct mail campaign to 3,000 customers.
2. Managed club's annual budget, initiating 7 new fund raising activities to raise income by 120%.
Key points: Use action verbs; Specify your achievement by number/figure.
3. There were not enough qualified members of the Sub-aqua club to train new members. So I looked for good ways of training and suggested one to the committee. I was put in charge of the new training program so that many more members than previously could be trained.
After rewriting:
3. Developed and implemented a new and more effective training scheme for Sub-aqua club.