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勤能补拙么发表于 2014-2-12 15:08
请问怎么加入口语小组？

直接在该贴发表回复，提交当日的口语话题的录音，即视为加入小组。

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勤能补拙么发表于 2014-2-12 15:08
请问怎么加入口语小组？

直接录音就好不用加

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请问怎么加入口语小组？

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yeyeshane 发表于 2014-2-10 11:05
首先感谢喵版对口语小组的支持哈~不过既然来了，就一视同仁，嘿嘿。Let's get started~

1.流畅度：总 ...

谢谢谢谢啦~~~~~~~~~

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发表于 2014-2-10 11:05:17 |只看该作者

本帖最后由 yeyeshane 于 2014-2-10 11:06 编辑

喵呜~ 发表于 2014-2-9 22:21
占座 2014-2-9 http://pan.baidu.com/s/1kT8x40J 喵呜~

还没有细听但是感觉肯定语法还是错了很多 ...

首先感谢喵版对口语小组的支持哈~不过既然来了，就一视同仁，嘿嘿。Let's get started~

1.流畅度：总体来说，流畅度还行。没有较明显的类似“额”“嗯”之类的停顿。不过有几处停顿较为明显，就是把单词拉得很长。比如“for instance” , for拉长了近一秒才接着说instance，其实这种固定搭配还是尽量练习得熟练一点为好。

2.词汇：感觉讲的词汇都较为常见。这有一点好处就是，会讲的较为熟练，不会发错音。但是不足之处就是考官不会有那种眼前一亮的感觉。不过适当的加入了"you know"此类的口头词，会让说话更为口语化点，挺好。还有道具这个词，用“invention”貌似不恰当？建议使用gadget。

3.语法：
动名词混用：as you can imagine, 不是as you can imagination
第三人称单数：“...help Da Xiong solve problems he meet...” =>meets "any prexx he want"=> wants

4.发音：发音挺不错的，不过语调有点点需要注意的地方。比如结尾as soon as possible，都已经结尾了但是却在possible这个词使用上扬的语调。不妥。还有就是几个词得稍微注意下发音“main（not man）”,"named","invention","attractive".

大概就这些。对了，时间把控还挺好的。

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发表于 2014-2-9 23:19:29 |只看该作者

本帖最后由 kaywoo 于 2014-2-9 23:34 编辑

yeyeshane 发表于 2014-2-9 20:26
Gter: lizil提交的作业

Part 2的时限只有1-2分钟，不够时间examiner通常会诱导你再说一点点，但超时examiner会直接打断，所以这次点评我只点评前2分钟的内容，大家平时做练习的时候一定要按照规则来练，逼自己在两分钟内说完需要说的内容。

1、流畅度：
开头不要“额”，不知道怎么开始可以用well，说的过程当中也不要“额”太多。其实我还是比较喜欢直接切入主题，例如：Speaking of popular comic actors/cartoon characters in my country, I would like to talk about Dingdang.
另外，观点与观点之间不能直接念题目。。。可以加一些As for/When it comes to/Let me share something about what this character does, …这样的表达，不要让自己的句子太突兀。

2、词汇：
日本漫画Japanese comics的s不能少，读的时候cs发/ks/，或者你也可以用anime这个词。
关于如何提高词语的运用，大家可以用用collocation dictionary，有很多网上免费版，什么词跟什么词用在一起，一目了然。还有就是平时多听多练，看电影电视剧注意native speakers都是怎么用的。

3、语法：
过去式：The name turned...
第三人称单数：what the character does…He goes…

4、语音：
lizil的发音其实挺好的，但是还需要注意细节，intonation可以多一些变化，建议多些模仿native speakers。
character重音在第一个音节cha。
收音要注意，name不能发成nane，发m要把嘴闭上之后才能发下一个音。
tools的l要发出来。

其实大家练一遍就知道，Part 2要说的内容挺多的，但时间比较短，大家在练习的时候尽量言简意赅，说一个观点可以据一到三个例子，说完一个方面就直接说下一个，不需要每一个观点都展开来说。

另外，如果可以，自己可以试着听自己的录音，听写出自己说的内容。

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发表于 2014-2-9 22:21:52 |只看该作者

本帖最后由喵呜~ 于 2014-2-9 22:42 编辑

占座 2014-2-9 http://pan.baidu.com/s/1kT8x40J 喵呜~

还没有细听但是感觉肯定语法还是错了很多语音语调也渣渣等一下再来编辑一下

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发表于 2014-2-9 20:37:48 |只看该作者

http://yun.baidu.com/share/link? ... 1&uk=3711419174

交作业咯。。。

顺便附上文本：

Well, when it comes to comic actor, the first one occurs to me is Charlie Chaplin. Chaplin was a British comic actor, filmmaker, and composer who rose to fame in the silent era. He became a worldwide icon through his screen persona "the Tramp" and is considered one of the most important figures of the film industry. What impressed me most is his toothbrush moustache. Although it was fake, it made Chaplin distingushed.And his films are quite fantastic.

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发表于 2014-2-9 20:26:04 |只看该作者

Gter: lizil提交的作业

http://pan.baidu.com/share/link?shareid=2756023087&uk=168129016

交作业了！刚开始备考雅思，能听出来是好久没开口讲英语的人了。现在开始会疯狂学习。大家轻拍，，最重要是给出实质有用的建议，我会继续努力的！！！

在给自己一个交代之前，在还没彻底甘心之前，请继续努力下去！

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