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With the development of modern society, the competition we will confront will become more and more intense. At this time, studying in universities plays a more essential role in our daily life, and this is where the controversy arises. Some assert that it is a great benefit for students to take part-time jobs. Meanwhile, those who are strongly opposed to it cite that it is not necessary for them to take part-time jobs. As my own perpective, the former one is more favorable. (assert,cite用的不错,favorable本来就有比较的意思,不用比较级)
The first reason I want to put forward is that in the process of taking part-time jobs, the college students can accumulate work experience, which will help them when they graduate and hunt for jobs(with their future job-hunting after graduation). Citing myself for example, I have tried various part-time jobs such as being a library assistant, a salesman, or a city volunteer and so on since entered the university. When I was a library assistant, I learnt the patient attitude. As a salesman, I acquired the skill of how to communicate with others and recognized the importance of keeping optimistic no matter face with how huge difficulties(no matter how huge dificulties i am facing). And then, as a city volunteer, I could put my English fully into use and enjoy the sense of achievement brought by the smiles on others’ faces(others’ smile, 微笑也只能在脸上吧,简练些). I feel that all these experience will have positive effect on me
after I graduate.
The second reason to prove the significance of taking part-time jobs when we are university students is that we could improve the social skills. Since meeting with(删) different people come from distinct(个人觉得diverse好些) background, we can learn how to get along with each other and enrich the(our) communicating techniques(skills). If we undertake a team project, we are able to cultivate the team work spirit, cooperating with and tolerating others, and
at the same time making compromises. The more frequently we communicate with others, the more harmonious atmosphere we will have. After all, almost all kinds of occupations have to face the society, so it is important for us to increase these skills now in order to work flexibly in the future.(这句话很chinglish, 我会写成after all, almost all kinds of occupations require us a good communicaiton with the society,....)
Admittedly, although the merits for taking some part-time jobs results in are considerable, we cannot ignore the fact that it would disturb our studying to some extent. After all, with the time we spend on working increased, it must reduce our studying time. Furthermore, some part-time jobs such as cafeteria waiters need us to work at night, which means we have to go to sleep very late,
due to which
we cannot have an efficiency on next day studying. However, I hold(insist)
that though taking the part-time jobs has certain disadvantages, more impacts exerted by the forward pace of the requirement of future jobs preparation.(I insist that taking part-time jobs has more positive impacts on universtiy students’ job preparation inspite of some disadvantages)
To sum up, from what has been discussed discussed above, we could safely draw the conclusion that students should take some part-time jobs while they are studying in universities. |
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