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发表于 2010-8-15 17:31:34 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

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do you agree life today is easier and more comfortable than our grandparents' when they were child?

Perhaps no one could have foreseen these unprecedented changes that took place in the past few decades. Life today may beyond our grandparents’ wildest imagination in their childhood. . The doubt whether life today, however, is easier and more comfortable than our grandparents ‘ ( when they were young) remains to be one without exact conclusion. I prefer to endorse that
life today is not as easy and comfortable as it used to be.

Needless to say, the great transportation system, various entertainments ,abundant commodities, and the wide use of internet are all make life today more fascinating .despite ,the charming of modern life always comes along with troubles and bothers advancement in science and technology brought about
.

First of all, the application of new technology in our daily life does not make communication easier,but more complicated.
Today, there are multiple options like sending e-mails or chatting on the internet to communicate with a friend far away,but if you lack a knowledge of internet related techniques,there is a good chance that you might feel frustrated with the time-and-energy-consuming process. You have to apply for an account ,sign all the personal data, and think over a reliable password .after you’ve been through these annoying matters, what
act as a challenge
is the capability of being adept in typing fast or using the prevailing terms among the online-chatting. Perhaps the traditional way of writing letters is a easier and more comfortable way to communicate,as what it requires is just the ability to write .

Besides, the soaring growth of population and cities cast great threats on our life,concerning the food and transportation . Unlike my peers,I spent all my childhood in
countryside with my grandparents, who live a old-styled, healthy life since their childhood .when I went back to the metropolitan where my parents work, the terrible road congestion and poor air quality impressed me a lot..people here have to spend extra money on so-called green food and organic food, which is rather usual for my grandparents. When they go out, they have to choose between enduring the uncomfort caused by the crowd in pubic transportation, or driving waiting impatiently for hours in the endless line of cars.

In conclusion,life today is not as easy and comfortable as it once was. actually,I contend that what appear to be of great benefit do not necessarily meet our expectation.
As I’ve mentioned above, The internet demands
if people today intends to use it as an efficient tool for communication, and the growth of population and cities viturally lower people’s life quality.