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[未归类] 还有一个月考试,刚写了一篇作文(花了45分钟),欢迎求拍 [复制链接]

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发表于 2010-8-16 16:36:49 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
还有一个月考试,好久不写作文了,准备了一段时间背词汇,读NYTIMES才开始写的,大家看看我这篇文章能拿多少分,欢迎拍我。Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to make friends with intelligent people than with people who have a good sense of humor.

From past days into nowadays, friendship is always one of the most important necessity in people’s life. And as in statements the speaker renders, friendship could be assorted miscellaneous, there are friends with good sense of humor, with enormous intelligence and so on. And none of these friendships is rarely aligned by the order of importance, regardless of past or modern philosophers. And so is my opinion, which friendship is critical to our lives and almost every kind of friendship is as crucial to us as the same like our blood and veins.
For example, the friend with huge knowledge is, of course, the goal for us to study and even admire. Because the intelligent people, like a professor, has so many good characteristics our human beings should have, the sturdiness to the field he has been drilling, the stunning urbane disposition and the savory occupation nearly everyone eager to have. As you could see, owning such a friend in our lives is a pleasure and privileged for us and would promote our brainstorm and routine taste.

But should we neglect the one who could bring laughter when we are boring and distressed and different flavors into our relevant fixed routine life? Of course not. These kind humorous people are another as of magnitude as the other friends, including the well learned ones. Like we all like the comedy movies and funny guys on the screen, it proves humor is the major ingredient in our lives. Everybody wants to be funny in front of the one we love and care and almost everyone longing for their best friends getting humorous for them during the kind of humdrum work and study when they need it. And it bears out this humorous fashion work out nearly every time and do lift the friendship into a new height.

Or the two styles of friendship is all we need? Or other kinds of friends cannot do equally in the role of our lives? The answer is certainly not. The rugged or more and more wide open road in the pursue of good lives that decide whether we are stumbling along or striding, is not merely in our hands but the palms of various friends in the society. The economy term, entrepreneurial relationship that could reflect the lives we are encouraged and thralled to lead, is a good summary of current aspect of our one relationship in which we participate and invest in hope for getting something good for return and this relationship might not bring us humor and intelligence, but rather some selections and pain to some extent because this relationship might not what we want in our heart.

So, in my opinion, every friendship, whether old fashioned or trendy, has some reason to stay in our mind and has some quality important for our growth. To me, they are equal and if only can we grasp and use them well in specific condition for our own good. They could serve a better grip not only in our lives but also in others’.

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没人吗?自己发现了几个错误

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