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作文题：Do you agree or disagree  with the following statement: teachers should make learning enjoyable and fun for their students.
作文：Rerently,some educators in my country have done an experiment in order to figure out what kind of methord benefits the students most.And they found,when the astronamy teacher tells a story about a planet's name, it is easier for the students to keep the new planet in their mind.And when the students are asked to prepare a play to show what they have learned in the history class,they are more likely to memorize the significant events ,even the details, than they were not asked. All these experiments tell us ,teachers should make learning enjoyable and fun for their students.

First of all, having fun while gaining new informations about nature and the world will make the class easier to accept the new concept. the latest study shows that kids who memorize new word by sing a song or tell a story are twice was fast as those who just keep spelling the word.And not only memerizing new things,but also understanding new terms or context in the textbook would be facilited through an interesting way.As a enjoyable methord of teaching will keep the students focusing on what is the class going on, and help them build up a interest in the subjects, students are prone to catch up with the teacher.So they could fully understand what have learned.  But if they do not, things may change.When I was in high school,math is the most difficult subject, for me, to learn.The strange fomulars and the teacher's dull tone kept me in the sea and made me feel sleepy.It seemed a thick wall between me and the math problems and fomulars.Little context in the book walked in my brain,so the math classes became a painful experience in my highshool life.

Additionally,students are facing a large amount of pressure in the fast-paced,competitive society.Enjoyable learning will lighten the burden which their parents,even the whole society put on them.In my hometown, many students choose the New-oriental,a school teaching English at weekends, to improve their language ability.Just because the teachers their always have approach to relax the  class, such as telling jokes,play a movie and so on. My freind who has attend to that school told me, he sometimes felt it is a pleasant thing to be there to learn English.

Since touching with things that were ever known before is really a difficult process, a boring teaching methord will undoubtly add more pain on the learners.Teachers should teach more than just give a lecture.A play show or a  subminiature debate in the class will benefits learners more.

作文是第一次写，没有计时，结果写了两个多小时，汗。。。。
中间写了又改，一直觉得自己思维混乱，思路还打不开。。。。
所以麻烦大家帮忙改改吧~拍砖也好是，啥也好，给点意见吧~谢谢呀！

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