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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.



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As time inches in and tempo of life progressively quickens, people are attaching more and more importance to the influence brought by the movies and television. Although some people view watching films and TV shows as wasting time, I think there are more advantages than disadvantages when considering their positive effects on broadening horizon or leading healthy lifestyle, which all contribute to a good behavior of young people. As a result, I am disagree with the idea that movies and television have more negative effects than positive ones on the way young people behave.

To start with, films and TV shows help young people see a bigger world, which will arouse their interests on study in order to go far in their future. Curiosity is the human nature, especially for the young people, who don’t know the earth well. Therefore, when they have a glance of new things, they are inspired to some degree. Take my brother Jason as an example. I remember the day we went to a theater to celebrate his 10th birthday. The film Roman Empire described a war happened in the ancient Roman. Jason was totally addicted by the charming and mysterious culture of the country, which made him a big conversion from a naughty boy to a hard worker on study. He told me he wanted to go to a brilliant college and major in this field one day, so he had to study hard now to make a solid foundation.

What’s more, when it comes to encouraging people to live a healthy life, some TV shows may have to be rewarded. Firstly, the news on TV always shows some terrible consequence of bad eating habits, which is definitely a warning to the young people who don’t realize the importance of the food safety. After that, they may change their bad habits eventually. A case in this point is my neighbor Mike, he enjoyed KFC so much that he bought it every day on the way home. However since once he saw a CCTV report about a man who strangely got an incurable disease by eating fried food often, I have never met him on the KFC any more. I think the report really works. Secondly, the advertisings for beautiful clothes on TV make young people pay more attention on the impression they make on others. Thus they do more exercise to keep in shape, which will help them keep healthy unconsciously.

Although I agree that there may be couple of disadvantages of watching TV and films to young people, like violent and pornographic contents, I fell that the advantages are more obvious, especially for these unhealthy information can appear everywhere occasionally, not only on TV and films.

To put into a nutshell, I think it is unwise to view TV and films have more negative effects than positive ones on the way young people behave.
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发表于 2014-7-11 21:26:14 |只看该作者
无名大侠 发表于 2014-7-11 21:25
第一个,很荣幸。多交流。


谢谢~第一次还是不太熟悉。。改的好坏多多包涵啊。。

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发表于 2014-7-11 23:25:35 |只看该作者

不好意思有点儿晚了~不要介意啊~~^^
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Jessica2022 发表于 2014-7-11 23:25
不好意思有点儿晚了~不要介意啊~~^^

没事~谢谢批改~

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