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TASK1 我觉得可以把second 换成also,whatsmore 之类的会口语化一些
TASK2 lz 一开始mention 了science class a bit oring 和prefer art 我觉得话题的引入很棒,而且发音很棒但topic development 我觉得可以再深入一点,lz 说的是 art class 可以relax,是我的话会加一点 broden horizon,再在relax 上加一些细节,eg。you know,as a student ,I am always busy with my homework and I sometimes gave up halfway ,however,after that,I enjoy myself a cup of coffee coffee and draw something interesting,I feel cool and ready to complete my study.